Dear [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
Happy Friday. This week seems to be pretty short due to Memorial day last Wednesday. As you know, I was stood up by my boss's mistake. I was called yesterday by my boss that I was supposed to attend on the job training. Frankly, I was irritated by the call becuase I'm busy preparing my final test these days. However, this is also a part of my job I mustn't give up. That's why I woke up early in the morning and I was headed for the place training would take place. I asked which seminar room I have to join in front of the counter. He checked his computer, and told me to go upstairs, pointing at 3rd floor on the small map hanging on the wall. I was waiting for 30 minutes alone. Nobody was coming. I couldn't know what happened until I called the head office. My boss misunderstood the exact date. It's originally planned on next Monday. BTW, I don't care about that because it already happened. I don't cry over spilt milk. ^^ Have a nice weekend. Bye. [이름]
강사 첨삭
Hello there. Thank you for doing your composition. I\'ll see you in class. Have a wonderful weekend.^^
T. Verna
Happy Friday.
>>>CORRECT
This week seems to be pretty short due to Memorial day last Wednesday.
>>>CORRECT
As you know, I was stood up by my boss\'s mistake.
>>>As you know, I receive the consequence of my boss\'s mistake.
I was called yesterday by my boss that I was supposed to attend on the job training.
>>>I was called yesterday by my boss to tell me that I have to attend a job training.
Frankly, I was irritated by the call becuase I\'m busy preparing my final test these days.
>>>Frankly, I was irritated by the call because I\'m busy preparing for my final test these days.
However, this is also a part of my job I mustn\'t give up.
>>>CORRECT
That\'s why I woke up early in the morning and I was headed for the place training would take place.
>>>That\'s why I woke up early this morning and I headed to the place where the training will take place.
I asked which seminar room I have to join in front of the counter.
>>>>I asked the front desk officer which seminar room should I join in.
He checked his computer, and told me to go upstairs, pointing at 3rd floor on the small map hanging on the wall.
>>> He checked his computer, and told me to go upstairs, pointing to the 3rd floor on the small map hanging on the wall.
I was waiting for 30 minutes alone.
>>>Or I was waiting alone for 30 minutes.
>>> I waited for 30 minutes alone.
Nobody was coming.
>>>CORRECT
I couldn\'t know what happened until I called the head office.
>>>Or I wasn\'t aware of what was happening until I called the head office.
>>>I didn\'t know what happened until I called the head office.
My boss misunderstood the exact date.
>>>CORRECT
It\'s originally planned on next Monday.
>>>It was originally planned for next Monday.
BTW, I don\'t care about that because it already happened.
>>>By the way, I don\'t care about that because it happened already.
I don\'t cry over spilt milk. ^^
>>>I don\'t cry over spilled milk.
Have a nice weekend. Bye. [이름]
>>>CORRECT
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