Dear [Name]

2012-06-08 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

Happy Friday. This week seems to be pretty short due to Memorial day last Wednesday. As you know, I was stood up by my boss's mistake. I was called yesterday by my boss that I was supposed to attend on the job training. Frankly, I was irritated by the call becuase I'm busy preparing my final test these days. However, this is also a part of my job I mustn't give up. That's why I woke up early in the morning and I was headed for the place training would take place. I asked which seminar room I have to join in front of the counter. He checked his computer, and told me to go upstairs, pointing at 3rd floor on the small map hanging on the wall. I was waiting for 30 minutes alone. Nobody was coming. I couldn't know what happened until I called the head office. My boss misunderstood the exact date. It's originally planned on next Monday. BTW, I don't care about that because it already happened. I don't cry over spilt milk. ^^ Have a nice weekend. Bye. [이름]

강사 첨삭

Hello there. Thank you for doing your composition. I\'ll see you in class. Have a wonderful weekend.^^ T. Verna Happy Friday. >>>CORRECT This week seems to be pretty short due to Memorial day last Wednesday. >>>CORRECT As you know, I was stood up by my boss\'s mistake. >>>As you know, I receive the consequence of my boss\'s mistake. I was called yesterday by my boss that I was supposed to attend on the job training. >>>I was called yesterday by my boss to tell me that I have to attend a job training. Frankly, I was irritated by the call becuase I\'m busy preparing my final test these days. >>>Frankly, I was irritated by the call because I\'m busy preparing for my final test these days. However, this is also a part of my job I mustn\'t give up. >>>CORRECT That\'s why I woke up early in the morning and I was headed for the place training would take place. >>>That\'s why I woke up early this morning and I headed to the place where the training will take place. I asked which seminar room I have to join in front of the counter. >>>>I asked the front desk officer which seminar room should I join in. He checked his computer, and told me to go upstairs, pointing at 3rd floor on the small map hanging on the wall. >>> He checked his computer, and told me to go upstairs, pointing to the 3rd floor on the small map hanging on the wall. I was waiting for 30 minutes alone. >>>Or I was waiting alone for 30 minutes. >>> I waited for 30 minutes alone. Nobody was coming. >>>CORRECT I couldn\'t know what happened until I called the head office. >>>Or I wasn\'t aware of what was happening until I called the head office. >>>I didn\'t know what happened until I called the head office. My boss misunderstood the exact date. >>>CORRECT It\'s originally planned on next Monday. >>>It was originally planned for next Monday. BTW, I don\'t care about that because it already happened. >>>By the way, I don\'t care about that because it happened already. I don\'t cry over spilt milk. ^^ >>>I don\'t cry over spilled milk. Have a nice weekend. Bye. [이름] >>>CORRECT

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