Dear [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
Good to have you back. From this week on, I'm getting more hectic because of final test period. Not only regular class but also additional supplementary lesson I have to be in charge of. Even class hour is a little bit extended.
By the way, we talked about Samsung's new policy especially hiring. Besides Samsung, more and more companies are trying to find their labor abroad in an effort to save their wage. We have to pay Koreans much more money than foreigners. That's why it is not difficult to find foreign workers on the street especially in industrial regions. Therefore, some sort of social problems happen currently such as racism, crime involeved in foreigners, and jobless of Korean young people, etc. I don't know much about economy and business but I think it's sure thing. The main goal of companies is to make much more money, not to spend much money to operate the facilities. Once government begin to interrupt, the growth of economy is dragged I guess. Bye. ^^
강사 첨삭
Hey there, good that I have you back. I\'m very happy about it! I know that you will be busy, though I believe that you can do it. For your determination, I can say that you will be successful of the assigned tasks that you have for this week. I can\'t really imagine that you still have the time to create a composition, I really appreciate your effort. Have a great one!
T. Verna ^_^
Here are my corrections for you:
Good to have you back.
>> Correct
From this week on, I\'m getting more hectic because of final test period.
>>From this week on, My schedule is getting more hectic because of the final test period.
Not only regular class but also additional supplementary lesson I have to be in charge of.
>> Not only my regular class but also additional supplementary lesson I have to be in charged of.
Even class hour is a little bit extended.
>> CorrectBy the way, we talked about Samsung\'s new policy especially hiring.
>> Correct
Besides Samsung, more and more companies are trying to find their labor abroad in an effort to save their wage.
>> Correct
We have to pay Koreans much more money than foreigners.
>> Correct
That\'s why it is not difficult to find foreign workers on the street especially in industrial regions.
>> Correct
Therefore, some sort of social problems happen currently such as racism, crime involeved in foreigners, and jobless of Korean young people, etc.
>> Therefore,some sort of social problems happen currently such as racism, crime involved in foreigners, and jobless of Korean young people, etc.
I don\'t know much about economy and business but I think it\'s sure thing.
>> Correct
The main goal of companies is to make much more money, not to spend much money to operate the facilities.
>> Correct
Once government begin to interrupt, the growth of economy is dragged I guess.
>> Correct
Bye. ^^
>> Correct
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