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Thank you for your advice. I felt it's really helpful to me. And this is my manuscript for the presentation. I couln't help dividing into two parts becaus this board have a limited words. Good afternoon everyone, I planned my design within the framework of “landscape of the living environment” in Dujiangyan especially focused on the waterway. First of all, for the objective to make the new vitality on this area having been almost for 2000years, I'd like to set my concept as MEMORIES:VITALITY of the EARTH. This is the conceptual plan. I thought it from 3 respects. First is the waterway. I'd like to make a familiar space toward canals through making the streamlined canals because now there are too many straight canals ignored original microtopography.

Hi [이름]! This is a great manuscript that you have written. I am happy to hear that my advice was a big help on your part. Always remember that practice makes perfect. ^^Jane Thank you for your advice. >> correctI felt it's really helpful to me. >> I felt that it was really helpful to me.And this is my manuscript for the presentation. >> Therefore, this is my manuscript for the presentation.I couln't help dividing into two parts becaus this board have a limited words.>> I couldn't help dividing it into two parts because this board has limited words that you can type.Good afternoon everyone, >> correctI planned my design within the framework of “landscape of the living environment” in Dujiangyan especially focused on the waterway. >> I planned my design with the framework "landscape of the living environment" in Dujiangyan which is especially focused on waterway. First of all, for the objective to make the new vitality on this area having been almost for 2000years, I'd like to set my concept as MEMORIES:VITALITY of the EARTH. >>First of all, I’d like to set my concept as MEMORIES: VITALITY of the EARTH because the objective of having a new vitality on this area has been almost 2,000 years ago.This is the conceptual plan. I thought it from 3 respects. >> This is the conceptual plan which I thought/derived from 3 respects.First is the waterway. I'd like to make a familiar space toward canals through making the streamlined canals because now there are too many straight canals ignored original microtopography. >>First is the waterway. I would like to make canals more visible in space by making streamlined canals because there are a lot of straight canals being ignored by original microtopography.