Dear [Name],

2010-05-26 · 첨삭 강사 abegail

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This is second part of my manuscript. Second is the park way. I thought to establish pleasant pedestrian-ways through improvement of farm roads, and to attempt mutual connection among villages through diversification of activity on each village. And the last is community space. I'd like to enable to utilize as the community space being able to share with visitors through securing communal spaces around waterway or inner village. That's all. To tell the truth, I felt so depressed for the past few weeks. I didn't want to do anything. I think I was too stressful. Now it became better. Like you said, the most important thing is confidence for me. I'm so sorry that I delayed the lesson because I couldn't attend lessons from next Monday. Thanks and have a nice holiday.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! This is a great manuscript that you have written. I am happy to hear that my advice was a big help on your part. Always remember that practice makes perfect. ^^Jane This is second part of my manuscript. >> This is the second part of my manuscript. Second is the park way. I thought to establish pleasant pedestrian-ways through improvement of farm roads, and to attempt mutual connection among villages through diversification of activity on each village. And the last is community space. I'd like to enable to utilize as the community space being able to share with visitors through securing communal spaces around waterway or inner village. That's all. >> Second is the park way. I would like to establish pedestrian ways to improve farm roads and attempt a mutual connection among villages. Thus resulting to diversification of activities in each villageTo tell the truth, I felt so depressed for the past few weeks. I didn't want to do anything. I think I was too stressful. Now it became better. >> To tell you the truth, I felt so depressed for the past few weeks. It was so stressful, didn’t want to do anything but now, I feel better. Like you said, the most important thing is confidence for me. I'm so sorry that I delayed the lesson because I couldn't attend lessons from next Monday. Thanks and have a nice holiday. >> Like you said, the most important thing that I should have is confidence. I’m sorry for delaying the lesson because I won’t be able to attend my lessons starting Monday. Thanks and have a nice hoiliday.  

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