Dear [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello!
I have to admit that it takes time and effort to write not only a sentence but a paragraph.
I know that you be able to perfect writing with constant practice.
This will lead you to be a good English speaker as long as you will apply what you write when you talk.
You are a smart person and I believe in you!
T. Verna ~
What\'s up? I\'m happy to hear you really enjoyed your meal with your husband.
>>What\'s up? I\'m happy to hear you that you really enjoyed your meal with your husband.
You seem to still love him. ^^
>> CORRECT
>>OR You seem to be still in love with him.^^
Don\'t take that the wrong way.
>>Don\'t take it in a wrong way.
>>OR better: Don\'t take it negatively.
It\'s just kidding.
>>I\'m just kidding
I\'m really jealous you have someone to rely on and love unconditionally. KK
>> CORRECT..good construction here..
We talked about North Korea again.
>> CORRECT
When I was an elementary school student, there\'s a question on exam: \'What is the wish we have longed for?\'
>> CORRECT
\'The answer was peaceful reunification.\'
>>My answer was \'peaceful reunification.\'
However, the more North Korea provoke in some ways, the worse our relationship become.
>> However, the more North Korea provoke in some ways, the worst our relationship would become.
It\'s getting difficult to achieve reunification.
>> CORRECT
What\'s more, young students don\'t want to be reunified any more.
>> CORRECT
What a sad thing it is!
>> CORRECT
>>OR This is a sad thing!
If we had been reunified, I wouldn\'t have participated in military service.
>> If we had been reunified, I wouldn\'t have participated in the military service.
Every year, so much money is being spent on military facilities.
>> CORRECT..good construction here..
Otherwise, it could be used to something else such as welfare, education, culture, and infrastructures for people.
>> CORRECT..good vocabulary~..
Anyway, have a nice day. ^^
>> CORRECT
See you later alligator in a while crocodile.
>> CORRECT
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