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It's really sweltering hot today. Just cleaning for a while makes me sweat a lot. In Korea, four season is distinct so I'm already used to this humid hot weather. However, I prefer spring or fall. We talked about Kim Jungeun, the leader of North Korea. As we discussed, things are changed a lot, compared with his grand father, Kim Ilsung who was the founder of North Korea. At that time, tyranny was possible just by using strong power such as executing in public and sending prisoners to concentration camp, even brainwashing people with communism. People didn't have much information about democracy and no one could resist his charisma. On the other hand, Kim Jungeun has suffered from difficulties in holding his position. Many people're escaping from their fatherland to earn a living much more peacefully in south Korea. Even though Kim Jungeun has tried a lot such as plastic surgery to look like his grandpa and several provocations, He doesn't seem to solve this problems.

Hi! How was your day? i hope that you had a great day today ^-^ Thank you for sending me your composition. You did an awesome job for today! Keep it up! Continue practing speaking in English and just be confident in using the English language. See you again! Take Care! T.Verna It\'s really sweltering hot today. >>It was a sweltering hot day today. Just cleaning for a while makes me sweat a lot. >>Even if I\'m just cleaning for awhile it makes me sweat a lot. In Korea, four season is distinct so I\'m already used to this humid hot weather. >>In Korea,there are four seasons that is why I\'m already used to this weather. However, I prefer spring or fall. >>CorrectWe talked about Kim Jungeun, the leader of North Korea. >>Correct As we discussed, things are changed a lot, compared with his grand father, Kim Ilsung who was the founder of North Korea. >>As we discussed, things changed a lot,compared to his grandfather Kim Ilsung, who was the founder of North Korea. At that time, tyranny was possible just by using strong power such as executing in public and sending prisoners to concentration camp, even brainwashing people with communism. >>At that time,tyranny was possibel just by using strong power such as executing rules in public and sending prisoners to a camp and even brainwashing people with communism. People didn\'t have much information about democracy and no one could resist his charisma. >>CorrectOn the other hand, Kim Jungeun has suffered from difficulties in holding his position. >>Correct Many people\'re escaping from their fatherland to earn a living much more peacefully in south Korea. >>Many people were escaping from their fatherland to earn a living and to live peacfully in South korea. Even though Kim Jungeun has tried a lot such as plastic surgery to look like his grandpa and several provocations, >>Even though Kim Jungeun tried a lot of plastic surgery to look like his grandpa but there were still several provocations. He doesn\'t seem to solve this problems. >>Correct