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Happy Wednesday! Stay healthy even though it's too sizzler weather. We debated controversial issues about surveillance camera. Nowadays, thanks to cutting edge technology, almost everywhere we can find surveillance cameras very easily such as bus, subway, street, house, and even owner-driven cars. We can take advantages of them to prevent much crime and arrest culprits. However, there're also big problems caused by small cameras. For instance, infringing privacy, and it could be used by another crime. I heard some theives are trying to use a small camera so as to steal money. They installed hidden in an ATM to find out other people's password. At the same time, they also duplicate credit card. Next you can imagine. That's why it's not difficult to find Warning:Cover your hand when you push the password with a bag or book on the ATM machine. But I think there're more advantages we can take by using surveillance cameras as long as they don't install them in my room.

Good day! I am pleased because you are putting into practice what you have learned in English. Keep the flames burning when it comes to learning English. Remember that all our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them. T. Verna ~ Here are my corrections for you: We debated controversial issues about surveillance camera. >>We debated about the controversial issues regarding surveillance camera. Nowadays, thanks to cutting edge technology, almost everywhere we can find surveillance cameras very easily such as bus, subway, street, house, and even owner-driven cars. >>Thanks to the cutting edge technology nowadays, almost everywhere we can find surveillance cameras easily such as bus, subway, street, house, and even owner-driven cars. We can take advantages of them to prevent much crime and arrest culprits. >> CORRECT However, there\'re also big problems caused by small cameras. >>CORRECT For instance, infringing privacy, and it could be used by another crime. >> CORRECT..good vocabulary ^_^.. I heard some theives are trying to use a small camera so as to steal money. >> CORRECT They installed hidden in an ATM to find out other people\'s password. >> They install it hidden in an ATM to find out other person\'s password. At the same time, they also duplicate credit card. >> CORRECT Next you can imagine. >>Next thing you can imagine. That\'s why it\'s not difficult to find Warning:Cover your hand when you push the password with a bag or book on the ATM machine. >> That\'s why it\'s not difficult to find a warning that says \"Cover your hand when you push the password with a bag or book on the ATM machine\". But I think there\'re more advantages we can take by using surveillance cameras as long as they don\'t install them in my room. >>CORRECT..good humor :)..