Dear [Name]

2012-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

'Gorging yourself will lead to respiratory problems.' ^^ Don't eat too much your meal. We talked about a father, didn't we? My father is always in favor of me even if everyone is against me. My grand father pass away pretty early when my father was a middle school student. That's why he had to give up so many things he really wanted to do with his father. Furthermore, he couldn't help earning money to relieve burden for his mother while he kept up with his studies. Nevertheless, he passed the test for university of education where a few people who studied really hard can be enrolled. Unfortunately, my grand mother couldn't afford to school tuition without her husband. He finally changed his mind and became a civil servant for Korea railroad. That's why he doesn't want anything I don't feel like doing. He always trust and support me. I really appreciate his love but I haven't expressed how much I love him. I'm gonna call him after finishing my work at night. ^^[이름]

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], Thank you for sharing your family\'s story. I think your father is a wonderful person. I salute him and all fathers out there. They deserved to be loved and to be respected. See you! T.Verna \'Gorging yourself will lead to respiratory problems.\' ^^ >>Correct! Don\'t eat too much your meal. >> Don\'t eat too much of your meal. We talked about a father, didn\'t we? >>Correct! My father is always in favor of me even if everyone is against me. >> Correct! My grandfather pass away pretty early when my father was a middle school student. >> Correct! >>My grandfather passed away pretty early when my father was a middle school student. That\'s why he had to give up so many things he really wanted to do with his father. >>That\'s why he had to give up so many things he really wanted to do without his father. Furthermore, he couldn\'t help earning money to relieve burden for his mother while he kept up with his studies. >>Correct! Nevertheless, he passed the test for university of education where a few people who studied really hard can be enrolled. >> Nevertheless, he passed the test in a University of Education where few people who studied really hard can be enrolled. Unfortunately, my grand mother couldn\'t afford to school tuition without her husband. >> Unfortunately, my grand mother couldn\'t afford the school\'s tuition fees without her husband. He finally changed his mind and became a civil servant for Korea railroad. >> Correct! That\'s why he doesn\'t want anything I don\'t feel like doing. >> That\'s why he doesn\'t want anything that I don\'t feel like doing. He always trust and support me. >> Correct! I really appreciate his love but I haven\'t expressed how much I love him. >> Correct! I\'m gonna call him after finishing my work at night. ^^[이름] >>Correct!

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