Dear [Name]

2012-06-22 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

학생이 쓴 원문

TGIF, It's been an honor seeing you, Verna. I've been really happy thanks to you. Every day, I could talk to you about various things in English. I have not only achieved speaking ability but broadened much knowledges about Philippines. I also sometimes feel frustrated when I got in trouble in studying English. I was serious concerned if I can succeed in this field. However, when I began to talk to you every day, you encouraged me and never hesitated to give me good advice. I like the way we have talked. You never forced me to prepare for this class. That's why I could always participate in this class without any burdens. Make sure the only ten minutes we were talking was the greatest moment of whole my daily lives. I'm gonna join again. Until then bye. Written by : [이름]

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름],             A perfect composition. Thank you for your diligence. I\'m also very happy to have you in my class. I will be waiting for the time you are free again. See you! Take care! Good luck on your final examination. ~Teacher Verna~ TGIF, It\'s been an honor seeing you, Verna. >>Correct I\'ve been really happy, thanks to you. >>Correct Every day, I could talk to you about various things in English. >>Correct I have not only achieved speaking ability but broadened much knowledges about Philippines. >>Correct I also sometimes feel frustrated when I got in trouble in studying English. >>Correct I was serious concerned if I can succeed in this field. >>Correct However, when I began to talk to you every day, you encouraged me and never hesitated to give me good advice. >>Correct I like the way we have talked. >>Correct You never forced me to prepare for this class. >>Correct That\'s why I could always participate in this class without any burdens. >>Correct Make sure the only ten minutes we were talking was the greatest moment of whole my daily lives. >>Correct I\'m gonna join again. >>Correct Until then bye.  >>Correct Written by : [이름]>>Correct

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