Dear [Name],

2010-06-14 · 첨삭 강사 janel

학생이 쓴 원문

It has been raining steadily all day. I’m sure it will be started the rainy season. Last month, I bought a rain boots to greet the rainy season. But after I bought it, it didn’t rain. So I’m waiting for the rain. I think we will finish the unit 1 of textbook tomorrow. Wow. Time is gone so fast. I feel still hard to get up early. 7 o’clock is too early to me. Thursday is last day of our lesson. I’m not sure if I’ll continue a class or not. I may start again a lesson from July because I’ll be busier than now by the last day of June. Anyway, I really hoped that I write a composition every day. I’m sorry that I didn’t keep my promise unfortunately. Thanks for your nice teaching.

강사 첨삭

Hi, it was my pleasure teaching you. You are right, time flies so fast. Hope you have learned a lot from me. Always be confident in speaking English and just apply everything that you have learned. Continue doing the good things you are doing and I know in time you will master English!....Thank you so much! Take care of yourself always!   It has been raining steadily all day. >It’s been raining steadily all day.  I’m sure it will be started the rainy season. >I’m sure, rainy season will start anytime soon.Last month, I bought a rain boots to greet the rainy season. >correct!! But after I bought it, it didn’t rain. >correct!! So I’m waiting for the rain. >correct!! I think we will finish the unit 1 of textbook tomorrow. >I think we will finish Unit 1 of the textbook tomorrow. Wow. Time is gone so fast. >wow! Time flies so fast!  I feel still hard to get up early. 7 o’clock is too early to me. >I still find it hard to get up early. 7 o’clock is too early to me. >correct!! Thursday is last day of our lesson. Thursday is the last day of our lesson. I’m not sure if I’ll continue a class or not. >correct!! I may start again a lesson from July because I’ll be busier than now by the last day of June. >I may start again a lesson in July because I’ll be busy now until the last day of June. Anyway, I really hoped that I write a composition every day. Anyway, I really hoped that I have written a composition everyday. I’m sorry that I didn’t keep my promise unfortunately. I’m sorry that I didn’t keep my promise.Thanks for your nice teaching. >correct!!  

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