Dear [Name],

2010-06-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning. I’m in school now. Now it’s at nine thirty AM. After our lesson, surprisingly I soon went out home. The reason why I say it is surprising thing is today is rare event in view of my previous behavior. Although I try to go early to school every morning, I mean right away after our lesson, I always failed it until today. When I decided to do phone-english in morning time, I felt that I could get up early and after class I could go to a school soon. Now I know it was my illusion. Sometimes I slept again at home after class and sometimes I stayed at home a whole day not going to a school. Yes, I was lazy. Therefore today is special. After this writing, I’ll go back my seat and study hard. See you later.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! It's indeed a surprising day! You sent me a composition for two consecutive days! I am so pleased. Enjoy your day and stay happy.   Jane ^^ Good morning. I’m in school now. >> Good morning! I'm at school now. Now it’s at nine thirty AM. >> Now it's 9:30 in the morning. After our lesson, surprisingly I soon went out home. >> After our lesson, surprisingly I went out. >> Surprisingly, I went out as soon as we finished the lesson. The reason why I say it is surprising thing is today is rare event in view of my previous behavior. >> The reason why I said today is a surprising day is that I rarely go out early. Although I try to go early to school every morning, I mean right away after our lesson, I always failed it until today. >> I've always failed to go to school early every morning. I've tried to go out right after our class but I always failed, except today. When I decided to do phone-english in morning time, I felt that I could get up early and after class I could go to a school soon. >> When I decided to enrol at phone-English in the morning, I thought that I could get up early and I could go to school after the class. Now I know it was my illusion. >> correct Sometimes I slept again at home after class and sometimes I stayed at home a whole day not going to a school. >> Sometimes I sleep again after our class or sometimes I don't go to school and stay  home the whole day. Yes, I was lazy. Therefore today is special. >> correct After this writing, I’ll go back my seat and study hard. See you later. >> After writing this, I'll go back to my seat and study hard. See you later.

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