Dear [Name],
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning. I’m in school now. Now it’s at nine thirty AM. After our lesson, surprisingly I soon went out home. The reason why I say it is surprising thing is today is rare event in view of my previous behavior. Although I try to go early to school every morning, I mean right away after our lesson, I always failed it until today. When I decided to do phone-english in morning time, I felt that I could get up early and after class I could go to a school soon. Now I know it was my illusion. Sometimes I slept again at home after class and sometimes I stayed at home a whole day not going to a school. Yes, I was lazy.
Therefore today is special. After this writing, I’ll go back my seat and study hard.
See you later.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
It's indeed a surprising day! You sent me a composition for two consecutive days! I am so pleased. Enjoy your day and stay happy.
Jane ^^
Good morning. I’m in school now.
>> Good morning! I'm at school now.
Now it’s at nine thirty AM.
>> Now it's 9:30 in the morning.
After our lesson, surprisingly I soon went out home.
>> After our lesson, surprisingly I went out.
>> Surprisingly, I went out as soon as we finished the lesson.
The reason why I say it is surprising thing is today is rare event in view of my previous behavior.
>> The reason why I said today is a surprising day is that I rarely go out early.
Although I try to go early to school every morning, I mean right away after our lesson, I always failed it until today.
>> I've always failed to go to school early every morning. I've tried to go out right after our class but I always failed, except today.
When I decided to do phone-english in morning time, I felt that I could get up early and after class I could go to a school soon.
>> When I decided to enrol at phone-English in the morning, I thought that I could get up early and I could go to school after the class.
Now I know it was my illusion.
>> correct
Sometimes I slept again at home after class and sometimes I stayed at home a whole day not going to a school.
>> Sometimes I sleep again after our class or sometimes I don't go to school and stay home the whole day.
Yes, I was lazy. Therefore today is special.
>> correct
After this writing, I’ll go back my seat and study hard. See you later.
>> After writing this, I'll go back to my seat and study hard. See you later.
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