Dear [Name],
학생이 쓴 원문
Sorry, I'm mixed up on the dates. :O
And I'm still working at laboratory... I want to go home....
Anyway.
We are possible to a healthy life style in modern world.
Of course, why not?
In my case, after work I have walking during an hour.
I believe in walking every day in order to keep healthy.
But It is difficult to exercise after working overtime.
Like now!
강사 첨삭
Hi J!
Sorry I was only able to read your composition now. Thanks though for making two of your homeworks. :D
I agree with you, we can still have a healthy lifestyle even we are in the modern world. That\'s if we choose to be healthy, right?
I will see you again tomorrow, J! :)
~Teacher Alice
Sorry, I\'m mixed up on the dates. :O
>> Sorry, I mixed up the dates.And I\'m still working at laboratory... I want to go home....>> And I\'m still working at the laboratory... I want to go home....Anyway. We are possible to a healthy life style in modern world.
>> Anyway, it is possible for us to have a healthy life style in the modern world.Of course, why not?
>> Correct!In my case, after work I have walking during an hour.
>> In my case, after work I walk going home for an hour.I believe in walking every day in order to keep healthy.
>> I believe walking every day keeps us healthy.
But It is difficult to exercise after working overtime.
>> But it is difficult to exercise after working overtime. Like now!
>> Correct!
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