Dear [Name],

2012-08-07 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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Sorry, I'm mixed up on the dates. :O And I'm still working at laboratory... I want to go home.... Anyway. We are possible to a healthy life style in modern world. Of course, why not? In my case, after work I have walking during an hour. I believe in walking every day in order to keep healthy. But It is difficult to exercise after working overtime. Like now!

강사 첨삭

Hi J! Sorry I was only able to read your composition now. Thanks though for making two of your homeworks. :D I agree with you, we can still have a healthy lifestyle even we are in the modern world. That\'s if we choose to be healthy, right? I will see you again tomorrow, J! :) ~Teacher Alice Sorry, I\'m mixed up on the dates. :O >> Sorry, I mixed up the dates.And I\'m still working at laboratory... I want to go home....>> And I\'m still working at the laboratory... I want to go home....Anyway. We are possible to a healthy life style in modern world. >> Anyway, it is possible for us to have a healthy life style in the modern world.Of course, why not? >> Correct!In my case, after work I have walking during an hour. >> In my case, after work I walk going home for an hour.I believe in walking every day in order to keep healthy. >> I believe walking every day keeps us healthy. But It is difficult to exercise after working overtime. >> But it is difficult to exercise after working overtime. Like now! >> Correct!

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