Dear [Name].
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello again. This is [이름] at your service. For a while, I couldn't help but quitting PWenglish because of several reasons. However, I always missed teachet Verna and PWenglish a lot. I think my speaking ability decreased while I wasn't taking this class. It's the first day we began to talk, is't it? Frankly, you spoke a little bit fast. I barely understood what you said first time but I got used to it. ^^ Even though it's too short time, I believe we can discuss so many things and share something interesting each other. From now on, I'm not gonna give up and do my best. You have to help me, will you?? Take care. See you tomorrow afternoon.
[이름]
강사 첨삭
Hi Beckam! Thank you for this wonderful composition. I\'m so glad to see you being inspired. That would really help you in trying to improve yourself. Take care!
T. LARA
Hello again. This is [이름] at your service.
>>Correct!
>> OR: Hello! It\'s me again, Beckam.
For a while, I couldn\'t help but quitting PWenglish because of several reasons.
>>Recently, I had to quit my classes at Power English
However, I always missed teachet Verna and PWenglish a lot.
>> However I always miss teacher Verna and Power English as well.
I think my speaking ability decreased while I wasn\'t taking this class.
>> Correct!
It\'s the first day we began to talk, is\'t it? Frankly, you spoke a little bit fast.
>> This is the first day of our class, isn\'t it? Frankly speaking, you spoke a little bit fast.
I barely understood what you said first time but I got used to it.
>> I had a hard time in trying to understand what you were telling me but I\'ll get used to it.
^^ Even though it\'s too short time, I believe we can discuss so many things and share something interesting each other.
>> Even though our class time is very short, I believe we can discuss a lot of things and share interesting ideas during the class.
From now on, I\'m not gonna give up and do my best.
>> From now on, I\'m not going to give up instead I\'ll do my best.
You have to help me, will you?? Take care. See you tomorrow afternoon.
>> Correct![이름]
>> Correct!
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