Dear [Name].

2012-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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Euphoric Wedneaday! It's really good to have you back. We discussed issues between two Koreas and Japan these days. More and more N.Koreans are defecting from their mother land because no more hope remains there. North Korean leaders, three generations of Kim, have been abusing their authorities for their own benefits. I think it's not easy for Kim to maintain his charisma. I don't think reunification is just around corner though. Kim's regime is likely to collapse before long. Dokdo islet is also the biggest issue recently. Japanese government is trying to make this issue bigger. They are appealing to the international court but we showed our stance. There's any reason to response as Dokdo is originally Korean territory. Any way Lara. I've gotta finish this letter. See you tomorrow afternoon. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hi there! I see that your interest in this said issues is really deep. WOW! You have very good point of views and it\'s nice that you put in writing. Anyway, kindly check the corrections I made for you. See you tomorrow! ~Teacher Lara Euphoric Wedneaday! >> A euphoric Wednesday! It\'s really good to have you back. >> Correct! We discussed issues between two Koreas and Japan these days. >> We have discussed some issues between two Koreas and Japan these days. More and more N.Koreans are defecting from their mother land because no more hope remains there. >> More and more N. Koreans are defecting from their mother land because there\'s no more hope that remains there. *A space is needed between N. and Koreans. North Korean leaders, three generations of Kim, have been abusing their authorities for their own benefits. >> North Korean leaders, including the three generations of Kim, have been abusing their authorities for their own benefits. I think it\'s not easy for Kim to maintain his charisma. >> Correct! I don\'t think reunification is just around corner though. >> I don\'t think reunification is just around the corner though. Kim\'s regime is likely to collapse before long. >> Correct!Dokdo islet is also the biggest issue recently. >> Correct! Japanese government is trying to make this issue bigger. >> The Japanese government is trying to make this issue bigger. They are appealing to the international court but we showed our stance. >> Correct! There\'s any reason to response as Dokdo is originally Korean territory. >> There\'s any reason to response as Dokdo is originally a Korean territory. Any way Lara. I\'ve gotta finish this letter. >> Anyway Lara, I\'ve gotta finish this letter. See you tomorrow afternoon. >> Correct! Bye. >> Correct!

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