Dear [Name].
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강사 첨삭
Hello there! I agree with your opinion. :) It is so true that today\'s generation is more advance as compared to our mothers\' generation. Us, women, are now more confident and competitive enough to do different jobs. See you tomorrow. ^^ Happy Thursday!
~T.Lara
Happy thursday.
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We have only a day to hang in by happier weekend.
>>We only have a day to hang out and have a happier weekend.
I\'m so hilarious to hear that you are absolutely satisfied with our talks.
>>It is hilarious to hear that you are absolutely satisfied with our class.
I still feel uncomfortable when it comes to speak English though, you always make me feel comfortable.
>>I still feel uncomfortable speaking the English language but you always make me feel comfortable.
That\'s all your effort. ^^
>>Thanks for your effort.
We talked about feminism.
>>Let\'s now talk about feminism.
Unlike our mother\'s generation, most of women living nowadays have the same right as men.
>>Unlike in our mother\'s generation, most of the women living nowadays have an equal rights as of the men.
I think our mothers didn\'t want their daughters to suffer from any sexual discrimination they went through.
>>I think our mothers don\'t want their daughters to suffer from any sexual discrimination that they went through.
That\'s why most of women are educated well thanks to their parents.
>>That\'s why most of the women are educated well, thanks to their parents.
So, many ladies play a major role in various sectors such as teaching students, designing products, and even training soldiers.
>>That said, a lot of ladies play a major role in various sectors such as teaching students, designing products, and even training soldiers.
Unfortunately(?) it\'s natural to share house chores between husbands and wives.
>>It\'s natural to share household chores between husbands and wives.
Lara, enjoy the rest of the day.
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See you tomorrow afternoon. Ciao.
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