Dear [Name].

2012-09-07 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

Happy Friday. TGIF. We talked about teachers in Korea. Koreans are tend to put education before anything else. Especially when economy situation is bad, people invest education more. There are two types of teachers, school teacher and Hakwon(Private cram school aka academy) teacher. In my case, I majored in electronics when I was a university student. There wasn't choice to be a school teacher. That's why I became a teacher in Hakwon. Now I'm also a part time student of English literater. After I graduate from this university, I can be a school teacher but I don't feel like becoming school teacher. School teachers don't have much flexibility. They should folow what gevernment orders. The quality of public education is still bad. So many students attend Hakwon. What I want is make student learn how to enjoy English even though it takes much time and effort. Bye. ^^

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday too^^ Thanks for doing this one. You are very expressive in this composition. Great job. I hope that all of the hardships of these students in studying would pay off in the future. See you in our next class. T.Lara   Happy Friday. TGIF. >> Correct We talked about teachers in Korea. >> Correct Koreans are tend to put education before anything else. >> Koreans tend to put education before anything else. Especially when economy situation is bad, people invest education more. >> Especially when economy\'s situation is bad, people invest more on education. There are two types of teachers, school teacher and Hakwon(Private cram school aka academy) teacher. >> Correct In my case, I majored in electronics when I was a university student. >> Correct There wasn\'t choice to be a school teacher. >> There\'s no choice to be a school teacher. That\'s why I became a teacher in Hakwon. >> Correct Now I\'m also a part time student of English literater. >> Now I\'m also a part time student taking up English literature. After I graduate from this university, I can be a school teacher but I don\'t feel like becoming school teacher. >> Correct School teachers don\'t have much flexibility. >> Correct They should folow what gevernment orders. >> They should follow what the government orders. The quality of public education is still bad. >> Correct So many students attend Hakwon. >> Correct What I want is make student learn how to enjoy English even though it takes much time and effort. Bye. ^^ >> Correct

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