Dear [Name].

2012-09-10 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there. It's Monday again. However, it's not the same Monday for me. Practically, it's the first day of my new work place. There are much more teachers here and students, too. Previously, I was in charge of every students but here besides me, there are three more English teachers here. Although I don't have to take many classes, I have to prepare for class more. Students can compare their teachers more easily. I feel burden a lot but I'm gonna do my best. Frankly, I can't get used to new atmosphere yet, so I can't focus on my duties. If I hang in there, I'll learn so many things from here. Any way, see you tomorrow. ^^ Bye.

강사 첨삭

First of all, I want to congratulate you on your new job. There is a tight competition out there and you have all it has to take to have your new occupation. :) When I was also new in my job, I can feel the pressure and the new atmosphere also bothers me. But now, I can say that I know everyone and I\'m much more comfortable . I hope you will remain extra confident and smile always because sooner, the strange atmosphere will be a friendly atmosphere. ;) Thank you so much for sharing. -T. Lara Hi there. >>Hi there!  It\'s Monday again. >>CORRECT! However, it\'s not the same Monday for me. >>CORRECT!Practically, it\'s the first day of my new work place. >>Practically, it\'s my first day in my new work place. There are much more teachers here and students, too. >>CORRECT! Previously, I was in charge of every students but here besides me, there are three more English teachers here. >>Previously, I was in charge of every student but here, besides me, there are three more English teachers.  Although I don\'t have to take many classes, I have to prepare for class more. >>Although I don\'t have to take many classes, I still have to prepare more for those classes. Students can compare their teachers more easily. >>CORRECT!  I feel burden a lot but I\'m gonna do my best. >>I feel the burden a lot but I\'m gonna do my best.  Frankly, I can\'t get used to new atmosphere yet, so I can\'t focus on my duties. >>Frankly, I can\'t get used to the new atmosphere yet that\'s why I can\'t focus on my duties. If I hang in there, I\'ll learn so many things from here. >>If I hang in there, I\'ll learn so many things.  Any way, see you tomorrow. . >>CORRECT! Bye. >>CORRECT!

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