Dear [Name].

2012-09-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jehann

학생이 쓴 원문

Unfortunately, the Typoon has damaged a lot in particular regions in Korea. Southern area I guess. Natural disaster is very terrible. Maybe two years ago, Japanese also suffered from huge earthquakes and tsunami. So many people lost their shelters and adorable family members. I swept my tears when I watched miserable news reports. This time, thress typoon came in a row without rest. That's why the damages were outbroken a lot. Some people say it is useless to prevent natural diasters. We deserve all the natural diasters as a punishment from God. I wish people would anticipate them so that we would escape from the damages. I heard your country has also suffered from natural diasters such as tsunami and flood. I'll pray for you. No more damages happen in your town. See you tomorrow bye.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름], I am sorry to hear about the terrible typhoons that have hit your country very recently. Natural disasters are really something we can never control and you are right, if we could be warned in advance about an upcoming natural disaster like a typhoon or a tsunami, we would be able to prepare for it and get ourselves as well as our loved ones to safety. I hope that no more typhoons will visit our country or yours but we can never tell, so the best we can do is to prepare and anticipate it. It is always better to be ready than to be sorry later on. Take care always and I will talk to you later. ------T. Lara------   Unfortunately, the Typoon has damaged a lot in particular regions in Korea. >>>CORRECT  >>>OR Unfortunately, the typhoon has done a lot of damage in some particular regions in Korea. Southern area I guess. >>>In the southern area, I guess.  Natural disaster is very terrible. >>>Natural disasters are very terrible.  Maybe two years ago, Japanese also suffered from huge earthquakes and tsunami. >>>Maybe two years ago, Japan also suffered from a huge earthquake and a tsunami.  So many people lost their shelters and adorable family members. >>>CORRECT  I swept my tears when I watched miserable news reports. >>>I wiped my tears when I watched the misearble news reports.This time, thress typoon came in a row without rest. >>>This time, three typhoons in a row came without rest.  That\'s why the damages were outbroken a lot. >>>CORRECT  Some people say it is useless to prevent natural diasters. >>>CORRECT  We deserve all the natural diasters as a punishment from God. >>>CORRECT  I wish people would anticipate them so that we would escape from the damages. >>>CORRECT >>>OR I wish people would be able to anticipate them so that we can escape from the damages.  I heard your country has also suffered from natural diasters such as tsunami and flood. >>>CORRECT  I\'ll pray for you. >>>CORRECT  No more damages happen in your town. >>>That no more damagew will happen in your towm.  See you tomorrow bye. >>>CORRECT

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