Dear [Name].
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there!! I'm also a human I guess. ^^ I've been working without spending whole weekend last week. That's why I feel a little bit exhausted. By the way, I was so shocked yesterday. You must be shocked if you know this. One of students in my academy was calling the police officers because he was advised by one of my co-workers. Actually, the day before yesterday, during her science class she was making noise. So science teacher just told him not to do that. However, she react very rudely to her teacher. So the science teacher raised his voice. But after she came back her home, she told her parents what happened at the academy exaggeratingly. So her parents and police officers came to the academy yesterday. I was totally shocked again this afternoon. I noticed her parents asked my boss sincere apology and all the money they paid for tuition fee for about 4 month, which his daughter has attend for. I felt creepy because all the things seems to be well planned by her family.
강사 첨삭
A pleasant evening to you! That is quite a story you have there. They should have talked first without the presence of the authority for them to settle evertything before going to this kind of situation.This is a shocking story indeed. I hope we\'ll talk more about that on our class. See you there. ^^
-T.Lara
Hi there!! I\'m also a human I guess. ^^
>>CORRECT!
I\'ve been working without spending whole weekend last week.
>>CORRECT!
That\'s why I feel a little bit exhausted.
>>CORRECT!
By the way, I was so shocked yesterday.
>>CORRECT!
You must be shocked if you know this.
>>CORRECT!
One of students in my academy was calling the police officers because he was advised by one of my co-workers.
>>CORRECT!
Actually, the day before yesterday, during her science class she was making noise.
>>Actually, the day before yesterday, during her Science class, she was making noise.
So science teacher just told him not to do that.
>>Her Science teacher just told her not to do that.
However, she react very rudely to her teacher.
>>She reacted very rudely to her teacher.
So the science teacher raised his voice.
>>Her Science teacher raised his voice.
But after she came back her home, she told her parents what happened at the academy exaggeratingly.
>>When she got home, she told her parents what happened at the academy in academy exxageratingly.
So her parents and police officers came to the academy yesterday.
>>CORRECT!
I was totally shocked again this afternoon.
>>CORRECT!
I noticed her parents asked my boss sincere apology and all the money they paid for tuition fee for about 4 month, which his daughter has attend for.
>>CORRECT!
I felt creepy because all the things seems to be well planned by her family.
>>CORRECT!
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