Dear [Name].

2012-10-09 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

학생이 쓴 원문

Long time, no see. Just a few days, I don't speak English at all but I felt very awkward when I talked to you on the phone this afternoon. I barely sent you what I really wanted to tell you. I guess there's no finish line to accomplish English. Hey, Lara, I have a dream as most of people do. As I already mentioned, after I retired with huge mount of money, I want to found Language center in my hometown where few facilities people can take advantage of. Why don't you join me? As time goes by, when you also retire, after letting your children tie the knot, you and your husband, you guys are always welcome to my hometown. ^^ Give me a hand for Language center I'm planning to found. Written by [이름]. P.S I'll reappy for this class next week. Don't go anywhere. Stick by me through thick and thin. ^^

강사 첨삭

Hello, I already checked your homework. You had minor grammar corrections in your homework and I advise you to review it. Anyway, what I really appreciate the most is the content. I can feel the sincerity of your essay. It was flattering and overwhelming to include me in your future plans. Thank you for that, ;-). Continue to achieve your goals and soon your dreams will come true. See you in class. Teacher Lara   Long time, no see. >> Correct! Just a few days, I don\'t speak English at all but I felt very awkward when I talked to you on the phone this afternoon. >> For a few days, I didn\'t speak in English at all but I felt very awkward when I talked to you on the phone this afternoon.  I barely sent you what I really wanted to tell you. >>Correct! I guess there\'s no finish line to accomplish English. >> I guess there\'s no finish line in accomplishing English. Hey, Lara, I have a dream as most of people do. >> Correct!  As I already mentioned, after I retired with huge mount of money, >>As I already mentioned, after I retire with a huge amount of money, I want to found Language center in my hometown where few facilities people can take advantage of. >>I want to build a Language center in my hometown where there are new facilities people can take advantage of. Why don\'t you join me? >> Correct! >> or Why not join me? As time goes by, when you also retire, after letting your children tie the knot, you and your husband, you guys are always welcome to my hometown. ^^ >> Correct! Give me a hand for Language center I\'m planning to found. >>Give me a hand in the Language center I\'m planning to build.Written by [이름]. >>Correct!P.S I\'ll reappy for this class next week. >>P.S I\'ll reapply in this class next week. Don\'t go anywhere. >>Correct! Stick by me through thick and thin. ^^ >>Correct!

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·