Dear [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi my teacher and also my freinds Cam. While last a few days, i couldn't do my homework. I am really sorry about that. There is no reason i didn't do my homework, just i am the lazy girl. And i am very sorry about changing class time. I had lots of fun while our class and enjoyed talking with you seriously. Your broad laugh was very funny and made me feel good haha. And i think you already felt friendly with not only me but also eric. am i right?? kkk
I have started calling class since september, and while only a month, i have gained lots of things. First of all, i don't fear speaking with foreigner anymore, even though i can't speak english perfectly. I think removing fear of speaking english is first step of improving english skill. For me, with your help, i could do it. So thank you so much.
And you know what? i used the sentence "with your help, i could do it" that i had studied in our class book "with john's help, it can be done." Here is second gained thing while calling for a month. I studied some expressions and i can utilize that! It is also possible to writting simple english essay and teacher fixs the composition. I love that system! I am very satisfied our class and i might extend class time from 10 minutes to 20minutes. If i have a class with you, it will be very nice, but i cannot help changing class time to day time. So i say good bye to you and thank you for a month and have a nice day!!! XOXO!!
강사 첨삭
Hello baby,
Thank you so much for making me feel very very special..
It\'s really sad that we\'re not gonna have class anymore..:( Reading this made me cry,seriously..
I hate good byes and you became so special to me..Even Eric..
But if that will make you more comfortable baby I just want you to change your time..
Thank you so much baby for everything..
I love you..
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Take care of yourself always..
Hi my teacher and also my freinds Cam.
>>Hi my teacher and also my friend, Cam.
While last a few days, i couldn\'t do my homework.
>>These past few days I wasnt able to do my homework.
I am really sorry about that.
>>correct
There is no reason i didn\'t do my homework, just i am the lazy girl.
>>There is no reason for me not to do my homework, Im just a lazy girl.kkk..
And i am very sorry about changing class time. >>correct
>>And Im very sorry for changing our class time.
I had lots of fun while our class and enjoyed talking with you seriously.
>>I had lots of fun during our class and I also enjoyed talking to you seriously.
Your broad laugh was very funny and made me feel good haha.
>>correct
And i think you already felt friendly with not only me but also eric. am i right?? kkk
>>And I know you also felt friendly not just with me, but at the same time with Eric.kkk..\"*I have started calling class since september, and while only a month, i have gained lots of things.
>>I have started with this phone class last September and for a month, I learned so many things.
First of all, i don\'t fear speaking with foreigner anymore, even though i can\'t speak english perfectly.
>>correct
I think removing fear of speaking english is first step of improving english skill.
>>correct
For me, with your help, i could do it. So thank you so much.
>>correctAnd you know what? i used the sentence \"with your help, i could do it\" that i had studied in our class book \"with john\'s help, it can be done.\"
>>correct
Here is second gained thing while calling for a month.
>>That is the second thing Ive learned in our phone class for a month.
I studied some expressions and i can utilize that! It is also possible to writting simple english essay and teacher fixs the composition.
>>correct
I love that system! I am very satisfied our class and i might extend class time from 10 minutes to 20minutes.
>>Im very satisfied with our class and might extend my class from 10 to 20 minutes.
If i have a class with you, it will be very nice, but i cannot help changing class time to day time.
>>correct
So i say good bye to you and thank you for a month and have a nice day!!! XOXO!!
>>correct
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