Dear [Name] :-)

2012-12-05 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Rowena. This is [Name]-mi. I'm pleased to meet you. It is snowing heavily all day in Korea. Where do you live? are you Okay? I'm Ok. but I'm worried about going home. I'll meet my boyfriend after work. you know, I fought with my boyfriend. Do you have a boyfriend? or Did you get a married? I wonder about you. anyway always take care, too. Bye!

강사 첨삭

Hello there Miss. [Name]- mi! Your sentences are good.Just don\'t forget how to write it in a proper way, ok? ( capitalization of words) I\'m so happy that  you sent this message to me. ^_^ I\'m sorry I wasn\'t able to introduce myself yesterday. I\'m married, my dear and I have a daugther. I\'m living in Baguio City. Probably, you have heard about my city. Many Koreans are studying English here. Anyway, let\'s talk more later. ^_^ Have a nice day! Take care. ~~ Teacher Rowena Hi Rowena. This is [Name]-mi. >>correct!I\'m pleased to meet you. >>correct! >> OR Nice meeting you. >> OR It\'s my pleasure meeting you.It is snowing heavily all day in Korea. >>correct! Where do you live? are you Okay? I\'m Ok. >>correct! ( Don\'t forget to use proper capitalization of words.) >> OR Where do you live? Are you doing fine? but I\'m worried about going home. >> correct!  ( Don\'t forget to use proper capitalization of words.) >>But I\'m worried about going home.I\'ll meet my boyfriend after work. >>correct! you know, I fought with my boyfriend. >>correct! ( Again,don\'t forget to use proper capitalization of words.)Do you have a boyfriend? or Did you get a married? >>correct! >> Do you have a boyfriend? Are you married? I wonder about you. >>correct!anyway always take care, too. Bye! >>Anyway, always take care, too.  

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