Dear [Name]

2010-08-24 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello~ Miss. [Name]. I'm your sudent, [이름] [이름], [이름]. I'm so happy that i'm taught by you. now P.M 11:00 O'clock...i've got off the office.. So i'll registe the Text in the evening. See you tomorrow AM 8:00 O'Clock. ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],
I'm so happy to hear that from you. And I am willing to help you in enhancing your English language skill.
See you tomorrow!
Teacher Jaimme
Hello~ Miss. [Name].
>> Correct
I'm your sudent, [이름] [이름], [이름].
>> Correct
I'm so happy that i'm taught by you.
>> I'm so happy that I was taught by you
now P.M 11:00 O'clock...i've got off the office..
>> Now it's 11:00 P.M. I've got off the office.
So i'll registe the Text in the evening.
>> So, I'll register the text in the evening.
See you tomorrow AM 8:00 O'Clock. ^^
>> See you tomorrow morning at 8:00. ^^

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