Dear [Name]

It's been a really long time since we last talked each other, hasn't it? As I　said, I have been totally hectic these days. You know? I'm still a part time student and I　also teach students English. I had to prepare for my final tests and I　also prepare their final tests. Come to think of it, new year is just around the corner. How have you been in 2012? Actually, I'm not the kind of person who regrets what I did. However, smoking is the only thing I regret seriously. I think not only quitting smoking but working out would be the top priorities for my new years' resolutions. Besides, staying with Verna is also what I　really make a rule. Written by [이름]

Hello there! I appreciate your effort in sending over your homework tonight. Please go over my corrections for your improvement. I would be more than glad to discuss this topic in our class. T. Verna^^ Here are my corrections for you: It\'s been a really long time since we last talked each other, hasn\'t it? >> It\'s been really long time since we last talked to each other, isn\'t?  As I　said, I have been totally hectic these days. You know? >> As I said before, I had a totally hectic schedule these days. (Please take note on your sentence structuring) I\'m still a part time student and I　also teach students English. >> DID YOU MEAN: I am a student and a part time English teacher as well. I had to prepare for my final tests and I　also prepare their final tests. >> I had prepare for my final test and I also need to prepare their final test. Come to think of it, new year is just around the corner. >> If you come to think of it? New year is almost near. (Better) How have you been in 2012? Actually, I\'m not the kind of person who regrets what I did. >> Correct However, smoking is the only thing I regret seriously. >> Correct I think not only quitting smoking but working out would be the top priorities for my new years\' resolutions. >> I think not only to quit smoking but also to work out would be at the top of my priorities for new years\' resolutions. Besides, staying with Verna is also what I　really make a rule. >> DID YOU MEAN: Aside from that, staying with Verna is also one in my list.Written by [이름] >> Correct