Dear [Name]

2012-12-28 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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Good to have you back, Verna.  To tell the truth, I really enjoy myself when I talk to you despite we're on the phone.  It's quite cold here and snows a lot.  It's getting colder and colder because of global warming I guess.  That might sound strange but it is true.  People all over the world take advantage of fossil fuel thoughtlessly.  The World temperature rises a lot but experts say North and South pole are getting colder.  Heavy snow is also problem I'm sick and tired of these days.  I couldn't help but cancel today's class so as to prevent any accident caused by snow.  It's not that simple work?  I had to call all the students who are supposed to attend not to attend today's class.  Teaching is much easier.  ^^  Any way, happy brand-new year.  Let's get along with each others next years, too.  Take good care.  Bye.    Written by [이름].

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Thank you for your effort in sending over your homework tonight, I apprecaiate it. Please go over my corrections for your improvement. I would be more than glad to see you again next year. Enjoy your Holiday! :) T. Verna^^ Here are my corrections for you: Good to have you back, Verna. >> Correct To tell the truth, I really enjoy myself when I talk to you despite we\'re on the phone. >> DID YOU MEAN: To tell you the truth, I\'m really enjoying myself whenever I\'m talking to you on the phone. It\'s quite cold here and snows a lot. >> It\'s quite cold here and it\'s snowing a lot. (Better) It\'s getting colder and colder because of global warming I guess. >> Correct That might sound strange but it is true. >> Correct (Great sentence^^) People all over the world take advantage of fossil fuel thoughtlessly. >> Most people all over the world take advantage of the fossil fuel intensely. The World temperature rises a lot; but experts say North and South pole are getting colder. >> The World\'s temperature rises a lot; but experts say North and South pole are getting colder. Heavy snow is also problem I\'m sick and tired of these days. >> Heavy snow is also problem, I feel sick and tired these days. I couldn\'t help but cancel today\'s class so as to prevent any accident caused by snow. >> I couldn\'t help but cancel our class for today, so as to prevent any accident caused by heavy snow. It\'s not that simple work? >> DID YOU MEAN: It\'s not an easy task. I had to call all the students who are supposed to attend not to attend today\'s class. >> I had to call every student who are supposed to attend not to attend class anymore. Teaching is much easier. >> Correct >> Or Teaching is easier than any other jobs. (Compare and contrast) Any way, happy brand-new year. >> Anyway, happy brand-new year. Let\'s get along with each others next years, too. >> Let\'s get a long with each other again next year. Take good care. Bye.Written by [이름]. >> Correct

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