Dear [Name]

Good to have you back. Good to hear you enjoyed yourself during holidays. Unfortunately, I‘ve got myself sore throat but don't worry about that. It'll be fine sooner or later cuz I don't smoke any longer. It was one of my new year's resolutions I guess. As we talked about the bad police officer allegedly supporting burglars. That sort of incidents have happened sometimes in Korea. Some people say it is also one of the most serious social problems which cannot be corrected easily for a long time. Historically, people who have pretty good status sometimes misuse their authorities so as to satisfy their private profits. That's why I suggest they be punished more severely to prevent any more crimes. Have a nice day. ^^ Written by [이름]

Hello there! I appreciate your effort in sending over your homework tonight. Please go over my corrections for your improvement. I would be more than glad to discuss this matters in our class. T. Verna^^ Here are my corrections for you: Good to have you back. >> Correct >> It\'s good to have you back. Good to hear you enjoyed yourself during holidays. Unfortunately, I‘ve got myself sore throat but don\'t worry about that. >> Correct >>  OR It\'s good to hear you enjoyed yourself during holidays. Unfortunately, I\'ve got myself a sore throat but don\'t worry about that. It\'ll be fine sooner or later cuz I don\'t smoke any longer. >> It\'ll be fine sooner or later because I don\'t smoke any longer. It was one of my new year\'s resolutions I guess. >> Correct As we talked about the bad police officer allegedly supporting burglars. >> Correct That sort of incidents have happened sometimes in Korea. >> Correct >> OR That sort of incidents happened for quite sometime in Korea. (Better) Some people say it is also one of the most serious social problems which cannot be corrected easily for a long time. >> Correct Historically, people who have pretty good status sometimes misuse their authorities so as to satisfy their private profits. >> Correct (Very good sentence^^) That\'s why I suggest they be punished more severely to prevent any more crimes. >> That\'s why I suggest they should be punished severely to prevent any more crimes.Have a nice day. ^^ Written by [이름] >> Correct (Very well said)