Dear [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
It was nice talking to you. My official plan this Saturday is to join a conference on the Modern Art. I mean I'm supposed to be there, but I'm not sure if I will be or not. One of the reason is a lot of things to do I have and the other one is that I want to be another conference on the Art History.
I'll let you know, of course, what kind of smart phone I buy on Monday. Have a wonderful weekend!
강사 첨삭
Hi ,Ma'am. That sounds exciting. I missed the days when I was a student and I had a chance
to visit some art shows and conferences. Eventually there is an art exhibit now, it's titled as "Myth
of the Human body" The artist made use of preserved human bodies. It looked like a wax work.
I wish I could go. Anyway, have a great weekend too.
See you!
It was nice talking to you.
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My official plan this Saturday is to join a conference on the Modern Art.
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I mean I'm supposed to be there, but I'm not sure if I will be there or not.
>>I mean, i'm supposed to be there but i'm not sure if i'll be going or not
One of the reason is a lot of things to do I have and the other one is that I want to be another conference on the Art History.
>>One of the reason is that I have a lot of things to do and on the other hand I want to be at another conference about Art history. I'll let you know, of course, what kind of smart phone I buy on Monday.
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Have a wonderful weekend!
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