Dear [Name]!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [Name]!!! I was teary eyed while checking your composition. I will miss you a lot surely. You were a great student and a teacher too. You’re a one of a kind person. You were so nice and kind to me. Most of all I really never had a hard time during our classes. Thank you so much for the classes you had with me. Don’t worry about your next teacher. Jen is my friend and she pretty and kind and smart too. I am sure you are going to like her. God bless you Ms. [Name]. I will miss you. Stay happy and healthy!!!
Lei J
You were always kind and nice to me having that beautiful smile.
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You look also smart.
>>You also look smart
sorry to say that I have to leave your class.
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I hope to see you again in the class or in some other real places not through internet.
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If you visit my home city I promise to give you a stay at my home for free.
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I am sure that you are able to get a job as an English teacher in a foreign language institute in Korea.
>>I am sure that you will be able to get a job as an English teacher in a language institute here in Korea
Because not only that you are an excellent English teacher but also most Koreans are crazy about learning English.
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The autumn weather in our country is so nice to live in; you can enjoy the bright and blue sky, a lot of fresh and delicious fruits and fishes.
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Visit our home city Busan, which is a biggest port in Korea, which is located in the south eastern edge of our country.
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Many blesses onto you!
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