Dear [Name],
학생이 쓴 원문
How are you? It’s getting colder. Did I say there are a lot of gingkoes in campus?
Interestingly, the symbol of university is Gingko. Recently I heard the reason why there are many trees in a campus. It was that one professor planted many gingkoes for his experiment in the initial stage of the university which was to find out fertilization between male and female of them.
It’s really wonderful scenery in autumn. Amazingly in autumn, many tourists visit the school. We can see them everywhere in campus.
But, gingko nuts smell too nasty, so cleaning staff sweep every day. They don’t become golden leaves yet. Last year I didn’t take a picture with Gingko so I will do it this year. This is my goal of this fall.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름],
As I told you earlier we don't have Ginkgo in the
Philippines so after reading your article, I searched it
on the net. It is very beautiful. I wish to see it and take
pictures like you do. Enjoy the fall! See you tomorrow!
Love,
Verna
How are you?
>> Correct
It’s getting colder.
>>Correct
Did I say there are a lot of ginkgoes in the campus?
>>Correct
Interestingly, the symbol of university is Ginkgo.
Interestingly, the symbol of university is Ginkgo.
>>Interestingly, the symbol of our university is Ginkgo.
Recently I heard the reason why there are many trees in a campus.
>> Recently, I heard the reason why there are many trees in the campus.
It was that one professor planted many gingkoes for his experiment in the initial stage of the university which was to find out fertilization between male and female of them.
>>It was because one professor planted many ginkgoes for his experiment in the initial stage of the university which was to find out fertilization between male and female.
It’s really wonderful scenery in autumn.
>>It’s really a wonderful scenery in autumn.
Amazingly in autumn, many tourists visit the school.
>>Correct
We can see them everywhere in campus.
>>We can see them everywhere in the campus.
But, gingko nuts smell too nasty, so cleaning staff sweep every day.
But, gingko nuts smell too nasty, so cleaning staff sweep every day.
>>But, ginkgo nuts smells too nasty, so cleaning staff sweeps every day.
They don’t become golden leaves yet.
>>They aren't golden leaves yet.
Last year I didn’t take a picture with Gingko so I will do it this year.
>> Last year I didn’t take a picture of Ginkgo so I will do it this year.
This is my goal of this fall.
>> This is my goal for this fall.
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