Dear [Name],
학생이 쓴 원문
Today is too cold as you know. Finally the leaves of Gingkoes became yellow.
I have a part-time job today. It is interpretation into Japanese. It’s my first translation. So, I’m afraid I cannot do well. Some officials of Korea come to Tokyo for symposium. My job is translation of casual talking for them on dinner not their speech. I will go there with some friends.
I wore a suit for it for a long time. It’s not comfortable and too fit. I may gain weight.
I didn’t tell you in the lesson that I can’t attend next class because I will stay in friend’s house tonight. I’m sorry I can’t hear your voice tomorrow. But we can meet the day after tomorrow.
Then I will tell you about my mistakes on first interpretation. See you. Take care.
강사 첨삭
Wow,Good luck with your part time job.I think it is really amazing to learn different languages.Teach me some on our lesson.See you then..
Today is too cold as you know.
>>correct
Finally the leaves of Gingkoes became yellow.
>>Correct
I have a part-time job today.
>>Correct
It is interpretation into Japanese.
>>It is Japanese interpretation.
It’s my first translation. So, I’m afraid I cannot do well.
>>Correct
Some officials of Korea come to Tokyo for symposium.
>>Some officials from Korea came to Tokyo for a symposium.
My job is translation of casual talking for them on dinner not their speech.
>>My job is translating casual conversation on their dinner not their speech.
I will go there with some friends.
>>CorrectI wore a suit for it for a long time.
>>I wore suit for a long time because of it.
It’s not comfortable and too fit.
>>It is not comfortable and doesn't fit me
I may gain weight.
>>correct
I didn’t tell you in the lesson that I can’t attend next class because I will stay in friend’s house tonight.
>>I didn't tell you in our class that I can't attned on our next class because I will stay in my friend's house tonight.
I’m sorry I can’t hear your voice tomorrow.
>>correct
But we can meet the day after tomorrow.
>>CorrectThen I will tell you about my mistakes on first interpretation. See you. Take care.
>>then I will tell you about my mistakes on my first interpreatation job. See you. Take care.
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