Dear [Name],
학생이 쓴 원문
Tomorrow's lesson will be the last this month. Actually I cannot make sure if I will continue it same time. I feel hard to get up early. This month I really didn't do hard even though there wasn't special schedules like an important seminar or a presentation. I didn't practice the textbook and do homework. I don't know why I didn't. This semester is very important to me because I became second grade. But I play out more before. There's a student from Philippines in my laboratory. He's very nice and kind but he can speak only English. I'm fearful to talk to him because I think I look like an idiot. Of course it may be my false. He always says slowly and clearly. But when I cannot get it nevertheless he do that, I really feel discouraged. More talk to others, more feel discouraged.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름],
I'm very sad that you are having hard time waking up in the morning.
I really wish to help you learn English. I pray that your decision will be for your
gain. Take care! See you again!
Love,
VernaTomorrow's lesson will be the last this month.
>>Tomorrow's lesson will be the last for this month.
Actually I cannot make sure if I will continue it same time.
>>Actually, I'm not sure if I will continue it at the same time.
I feel hard to get up early.
>>It's hard for me to get up early.
This month I really didn't do hard even though there wasn't special schedules like an important seminar or a presentation.
>> This month I really didn't do hard even though there weren't any special schedules like an important seminar or a presentation.
I didn't practice the textbook and do homework.
>> I didn't practice the textbook and didn't do my homework.
I don't know why I didn't.
>>Correct
This semester is very important to me because I became second grade.
>>This semester is very important to me because I became sophomore.
>>This semester is very important to me because I'm alreadya sophomore.
But I play out more before.
>>Correct
There's a student from Philippines in my laboratory.
>>There's a student from the Philippines in my laboratory.
He's very nice and kind but he can speak only English.
>>He's very nice and kind but he can only speak English.
I'm fearful to talk to him because I think I look like an idiot.
>>I'm afraid to talk to him because I think I will look like an idiot.
Of course it may be my false.
>> Of course it may not be true.
He always says slowly and clearly.
>>He always speaks slowly and clearly.
But when I cannot get it nevertheless he do that, I really feel discouraged.
>>Even though he was doing that, I still feel discouraged.
More talk to others, more feel discouraged.
>>The more I talk to people, the more I get discouraged
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