Dear [Name],

2010-11-02 · 첨삭 강사 abby

학생이 쓴 원문

Tomorrow's lesson will be the last this month. Actually I cannot make sure if I will continue it same time. I feel hard to get up early. This month I really didn't do hard even though there wasn't special schedules like an important seminar or a presentation. I didn't practice the textbook and do homework. I don't know why I didn't. This semester is very important to me because I became second grade. But I play out more before. There's a student from Philippines in my laboratory. He's very nice and kind but he can speak only English. I'm fearful to talk to him because I think I look like an idiot. Of course it may be my false. He always says slowly and clearly. But when I cannot get it nevertheless he do that, I really feel discouraged. More talk to others, more feel discouraged.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름],   I'm very sad that you are having hard time waking up in the morning.  I really wish to help you learn English. I pray that your decision will be for your gain. Take care! See you again! Love, VernaTomorrow's lesson will be the last this month. >>Tomorrow's lesson will be the last for this month.  Actually I cannot make sure if I will continue it same time.  >>Actually, I'm not sure if I will continue it at the same time.  I feel hard to get up early. >>It's hard for me to get up early.  This month I really didn't do hard even though there wasn't special schedules like an important seminar or a presentation. >> This month I really didn't do hard even though there weren't any special schedules like an important seminar or a presentation.  I didn't practice the textbook and do homework. >> I didn't practice the textbook and didn't do my homework.  I don't know why I didn't.  >>Correct This semester is very important to me because I became second grade. >>This semester is very important to me because I became sophomore. >>This semester is very important to me because I'm alreadya  sophomore.  But I play out more before.  >>Correct There's a student from Philippines in my laboratory.  >>There's a student from the Philippines in my laboratory.  He's very nice and kind but he can speak only English.  >>He's very nice and kind but he can only speak English.  I'm fearful to talk to him because I think I look like an idiot. >>I'm afraid to talk to him because I think I will look like an idiot.  Of course it may be my false.  >> Of course it may not be true. He always says slowly and clearly. >>He always speaks slowly and clearly.  But when I cannot get it nevertheless he do that, I really feel discouraged. >>Even though he was doing that, I still feel discouraged. More talk to others, more feel discouraged. >>The more I talk to people, the more I get discouraged

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