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2010-11-02 · 첨삭 강사 lynn

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I haven't checked up your feedback so often, but I did today. Thanks a lot. In fact, it was not Monday blue that made my voice sound low this morning, but fatigue because of the busy weekend. :) What was the topic you prepared for the class? Ah, Biennale is the name for huge international art exhibition which is held biannually.. e,g., Venice Biennale.

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Hi Ma'am. Thank you for your time reading my comments. You had made a very good impression lately and you deserve each comment and suggestions I've made. Regarding our topic, we're supposed to talk about Gunther Von hagen who used real human bodies for his exhibits. Anyway, we'll talk about that tomorrow. :0 See you!   I haven't checked up your feedback so often, but I did today. >>I haven't checked on your feedbakcs lately but I did it today, Thanks a lot. >>correctIn fact, it was not Monday blue that made my voice sound low this morning, >>In fact, it wasn't the 'Monday blues' that made my voice sound low this morning. but fatigue because of the busy weekend. :)  >>but because of fatigue of last weekend.What was the topic you prepared for the class? >>correct Ah, Biennale is the name for huge international art exhibition which is held biannually.. e,g., Venice Biennale. >>correct 

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