Dear [Name],
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, l read your feedbag.I was very happy to read your feedbag.
I just waked at 00:03 am.
Most of Korea's 20s sleep late. And I also sleep about 1:00 am. When are you sleep then? I think that 1 am is not late to sleep.I have a test or report, I go to bed at 3 am.
I know that is bad my heath, but I have a works to do sometimes.
I explain my plan. l think if I explain to use call, I can't say perfectlly. I catch a job! Yes, I am a student. It's a extra works.
When I have a extra times, I go to my student's home and teach her a math. I can get paid for my works.(I don't know what is right, work or works)
It's called private lesson. A few college student do a private lesson for pocket money.
I wonder that Is there like private lesson in Philippines?
If yes. have you been done?
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Kong Min!
In class, we talked about your job and the private lessons already. Let me just comment on the topic of sleep. ^^
I have varied sleeping times. Sometimes I am asleep by midnight, sometimes I can stay up until 3 or 4 am. It usually depends on what I'm doing. ^^
I agree that it is not a good habit though. It is definitely detrimental to one’s health. We should take good care of our bodies in every possible way, okay?
~June
Hi, l read your feedbag. I was very happy to read your feedbag.
>> Hi, l read your feedback. I was very happy to read it.
I just waked at 00:03 am.
>> I just woke up at 00:03 am.
Most of Korea's 20s sleep late. And I also sleep about 1:00 am.
>> Most Koreans in their 20s sleep late so I sleep at about 1:00 am.
When are you sleep then?
>> When do you sleep then?
I think that 1 am is not late to sleep.
>> I think that 1 am is not late for sleeping.
I have a test or report, I go to bed at 3 am.
>> If I have a test or report, I go to bed at 3 am.
I know that is bad my heath, but I have a works to do sometimes.
>> I know that it is bad for my heath, but I have a lot of work to do sometimes.
I explain my plan. l think if I explain to use call, I can't say perfectlly.
>> Let me explain my plan. l think if I explained on the phone, I won't say it perfectly.
I catch a job!
>> I got a job!
Yes, I am a student.
>> Correct
It's a extra works.
>> It's extra work.
When I have a extra times, I go to my student's home and teach her a math.
>> When I have free time, I go to my student's home and teach her math.
I can get paid for my works.(I don't know what is right, work or works)
>> I get paid for my work. (I don't know what is right, work or works)
It's called private lesson.
>> It's called a private lesson.
A few college student do a private lesson for pocket money.
>> A few college students do private lessons for extra pocket money.
I wonder that Is there like private lesson in Philippines?
>> I wonder if there is a private lesson like this in the Philippines.
If yes. have you been done?
>> If yes, have you done it before?
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