Dear [Name],

2010-11-10 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

Tomorrow, the special lecture will be held on campus. The lecturer is a professor of Harvard University. Now I’m really excited because he is a famous teacher on my field. I heard this information 2 month ago. That is why I restarted Power English. Many international seminars or symposium are held on this university. Unfortunately because of my English skill, they are useless. So I wanted to improve my English level in order to be able to understand their speech. The first one will be tomorrow’s lecture. I think that he will speak simply and clearly because he is a great lecturer. But I’m afraid that I cannot understand half of his speech. My laboratory organized this lecture. I may have a chance to talk to him. I just hope I can say him “it was a great speech and so impressed”.

강사 첨삭

Hello there,         Everytime I talk to you or read your compositions I can always feel your desire to learn English. I salute you for that! With regards to the lecture that you are going to attend you don't have to worry. All you have to od is bring a recorder so that you can go back to the messages that you cannot remember. I hope it will help. Love, Verna Tomorrow, the special lecture will be held on campus. >>Tomorrow, a special lecture will be held in our campus. The lecturer is a professor of Harvard University. >>The lecturer is a professor in Harvard University. Now I’m really excited because he is a famous teacher on my field. >>Now I'm really excited because he is a famous teacher in my field. I heard this information 2 month ago. >>I heard this information 2 months ago. That is why I restarted Power English. >>That is why I restarted Power English. >>That is why I re-enrolled in Power English.Many international seminars or symposium are held on this university. >>Many international seminars or symposiums are held in this university. Unfortunately because of my English skill, they are useless. >>Correct So I wanted to improve my English level in order to be able to understand their speech. >>So I wanted to improve my English level in order to understand their speech. The first one will be tomorrow’s lecture. >>The first lecture will be tomorrow. I think that he will speak simply and clearly because he is a great lecturer. >>Correct But I’m afraid that I cannot understand half of his speech. >>CorrectMy laboratory organized this lecture. >>Correct I may have a chance to talk to him. >>Correct  I just hope I can say him “it was a great speech and so impressed”. I just hope I can tell him it was a great speech and I'm so impressed.    

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