Dear [Name],
학생이 쓴 원문
Tomorrow, the special lecture will be held on campus. The lecturer is a professor of Harvard University. Now I’m really excited because he is a famous teacher on my field. I heard this information 2 month ago. That is why I restarted Power English.
Many international seminars or symposium are held on this university. Unfortunately because of my English skill, they are useless. So I wanted to improve my English level in order to be able to understand their speech. The first one will be tomorrow’s lecture. I think that he will speak simply and clearly because he is a great lecturer. But I’m afraid that I cannot understand half of his speech.
My laboratory organized this lecture. I may have a chance to talk to him. I just hope I can say him “it was a great speech and so impressed”.
강사 첨삭
Hello there,
Everytime I talk to you or read your compositions I can always feel your desire to learn English.
I salute you for that! With regards to the lecture that you are going to attend you don't have to worry.
All you have to od is bring a recorder so that you can go back to the messages that you cannot remember.
I hope it will help.
Love,
Verna
Tomorrow, the special lecture will be held on campus.
>>Tomorrow, a special lecture will be held in our campus.
The lecturer is a professor of Harvard University.
>>The lecturer is a professor in Harvard University.
Now I’m really excited because he is a famous teacher on my field.
>>Now I'm really excited because he is a famous teacher in my field.
I heard this information 2 month ago.
>>I heard this information 2 months ago.
That is why I restarted Power English.
>>That is why I restarted Power English.
>>That is why I re-enrolled in Power English.Many international seminars or symposium are held on this university.
>>Many international seminars or symposiums are held in this university.
Unfortunately because of my English skill, they are useless.
>>Correct
So I wanted to improve my English level in order to be able to understand their speech.
>>So I wanted to improve my English level in order to understand their speech.
The first one will be tomorrow’s lecture.
>>The first lecture will be tomorrow.
I think that he will speak simply and clearly because he is a great lecturer.
>>Correct
But I’m afraid that I cannot understand half of his speech.
>>CorrectMy laboratory organized this lecture.
>>Correct
I may have a chance to talk to him.
>>Correct
I just hope I can say him “it was a great speech and so impressed”.
I just hope I can tell him it was a great speech and I'm so impressed.
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