Dear [Name]

2013-08-17 · 첨삭 강사 Lexi

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear [Name] great to see you, Chelsea. As I already mentioned, I haven't spoken English for a while. That's why I'm quite unfamiliar with English for now. However, I'm gonna do my best, so give me a hand, please. I was born in 1982, December 25th. Frankly, I wasn't good student when I was in school. Fortunately, I got to know how to enjoy English. That's why I teach English in private academy. You know what? Enjoying English is pretty attractive I guess. Because it is not something I can get used to easily at all. There's no finish line when it comes to English. All I can do is just keep trying. That's the reason I made up my mind teaching English for the rest of my life. If I had accomplished English easily, I wouldn't have chosen this way. I hope you also enjoy our talk on the phone every day. Have a nice weekend. See you next Monday. Bye. XXOO Written by [이름]

강사 첨삭

Hi there DAVID [이름]! ^_^ Thanks for sending this composition in. I always enjoy the class with, don\'t worry. _^_. I hope you do feel the same. Anyway, have a blast this weekend. See you in two days. Teacher Chelsea.    _^_Dear Chelsea>>correct!So great to see you, Chelsea. >>correct! As I already mentioned, I haven\'t spoken English for a while. >>correct! That\'s why I\'m quite unfamiliar with English for now. >>correct! However, I\'m gonna do my best, so give me a hand, please. >>correct!I was born in 1982, December 25th. >>correct! OR >> I was born on the 25th day of December 1982. Frankly, I wasn\'t good student when I was in school. >>Frankly, I wasn\'t a good student when I was in school. Fortunately, I got to know how to enjoy English. >>correct! That\'s why I teach English in private academy. >>correct! You know what? Enjoying English is pretty attractive I guess. >>correct! Because it is not something I can get used to easily at all. >>correct! There\'s no finish line when it comes to English. >>correct! All I can do is just keep trying. >>correct! That\'s the reason I made up my mind teaching English for the rest of my life. >>correct! If I had accomplished English easily, I wouldn\'t have chosen this way. >>correct!I hope you also enjoy our talk on the phone every day. >>correct! Have a nice weekend. >>correct! See you next Monday. Bye. >>correct!XXOO >>YOU MEAN TO SAY: XOXO Written by [이름] >>correct!

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