Dear [Name]

2013-08-20 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear [Name] for your compliment. I don't know why but I also realized I really have a fun when I speak something in English. I guess that's because I can get in touch with many nice foreign friends like you through the English. Teaching someone is really difficult task I guess. Sometimes, I should be their mentor, uncle, friend, and even parents. Besides lessons they study in a classroom, their private affairs such as relationships between friends are also what I should take care of. Unlike public school, students can leave private academy whenever they'd like to. Without emotional bond, if teachers just taught what they were supposed to teach, they would have failed sooner or later. See you tomorrow afternoon, bye [이름]

강사 첨삭

Good Evening [이름], Thank you very much for your thought. I do agree that having a speacial bond with the student is also good. Being a teacher means being the second mother or parent to the students, it is a difficult task since it gives great responsibility for the teacher.That is why I really appreciate all the teacher in the world. T.Chelsea Dear [Name]>>Dear [Name],Thanks for your compliment. >>Correct! I don\'t know why but I also realized I really have a fun when I speak something in English. I guess that\'s because I can get in touch with many nice foreign friends like you through the English. >>I don\'t know why but I also realized that I am really having fun whenever I speak in English. I guess that\'s because I can get in touch with many nice foreign friends like you through English. Teaching someone is really difficult task I guess. Sometimes, I should be their mentor, uncle, friend, and even parents. >>I guess teaching is a really difficult task. Sometimes, I should be their mentor, uncles, friend and even parents. Besides lessons they study in a classroom, their private affairs such as relationships between friends are also what I should take care of. >>Correct! Unlike public school, students can leave private academy whenever they\'d like to. >>Correct! Without emotional bond, if teachers just taught what they were supposed to teach, they would have failed sooner or later. >>Without emotional bond, if teachers just teach what they were supposed to teach, they will fail sooner or later.See you tomorrow afternoon, bye>>Correct![이름] >>Correct!

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