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I really appreciate your effort. Your comment always makes me encouraged a lot. We talked about Christiano Ronaldo, who is one of the most popular soccer players in the world. Frankly speaking, his first impression was not good. I didn't mean his play was not perfect. He seemed to be boastful and arrogant. However, I was wrong. He is the more diligent than any others and he was just confident when he was on the ground. As we read news article, he didn't hurt his fan's heart by doing thoughtless behavior. Sometimes, I was not generous with my students. I even get angry easily and scold my students, hurting their mind. Regardless of reason, I　should have been more considerate toward others as Ronaldo did. Anyway, do not expect too much my song. LOL. Take care. See you tomorrow. Bye. Written by [이름]

Hi there Opaa!! Thanks for the compliment. It\'s not just my part to teach you something but also to help you how to study, one of those is ENCOURAGEMENT. Anyway, go over the corrections. By the way I am already excited on your song!! LOL See you in class. Take care!! T. Chelsea    I really appreciate your effort. >>correct! Your comment always makes me encouraged a lot. >>Your comment always encourage me a lot. We talked about Christiano Ronaldo, who is one of the most popular soccer players in the world. >> correct! Frankly speaking, his first impression was not good. >> correct! >>OR: Frankly speaking, my first impression to him was not good. I didn\'t mean his play was not perfect. >> I didn\'t mean that his game was not perfect. He seemed to be boastful and arrogant. >> correct! However, I was wrong. >> correct! He is the more diligent than any others and he was just confident when he was on the ground. >> He is more diligent than any others and he is just confident whenever he is on the ground. As we read news article, he didn\'t hurt his fan\'s heart by doing thoughtless behavior. >> As we read the news article, he didn\'t hurt his fan\'s feelings by doing a thoughtless behavior. Sometimes, I was not generous with my students. >>correct! I even get angry easily and scold my students, hurting their mind. >> I even easily get angry and scold my students which hurt them. Regardless of reason, I　should have been more considerate toward others as Ronaldo did. >> Regardless of the reason, I should have been more considerate toward others as Ronaldo did. Anyway, do not expect too much my song. LOL. >> Anyway, do not expect too much from my song. LOL. Take care. >>correct! See you tomorrow. >> correct! Bye. >> correct! Written by [이름] >> correct!