Dear [Name]

2013-08-23 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

Thanks God It's Friday. We call Friday 'Burning Friday', which means people stay up late at Friday night, drinking, dancing, and just hanging around. Few people go to bed early on Friday. However, I can't enjoy any more as much as I did because I feel exhausted easily. That's the proof I'm not a young guy like guys who are ready to burn their Friday night eagerly. I hope you enjoy your own weekend with someone you love.

강사 첨삭

Hello there^^ Thanks for your message. I hope so that you will regain that \'Burning Friday\' which you had before. I think you can, just think positively and don\'t be cluttered with your negative thoughts. I know you are always busy so at times everyone deserves to hang-out and sleep late on Fridays just like other people do^^. Have a good weekend too. See you in class^^ T.Chelsea^^   Thanks God It\'s Friday. >>Correct We call Friday \'Burning Friday\', which means people stay up late at Friday night, drinking, dancing, and just hanging around. >>Correct Few people go to bed early on Friday. >>Correct >>OR: Few people go to bed early on Fridays. However, I can\'t enjoy any more as much as I did because I feel exhausted easily. >>Correct That\'s the proof I\'m not a young guy like guys who are ready to burn their Friday night eagerly. >> That\'s one proof that I am not a young anymore unlike other guys who are ready to burn their Friday night eagerly. I hope you enjoy your own weekend with someone you love. >>Correct^^

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