Dear [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
When you call me at my office, if I don't receive your call, I asked you to call me at [전화번호]. But My home phone bell didn't ring although I waited for your call. Please remember my request!
강사 첨삭
David,
I sincerely apologize for that. Last time, I informed you, I was able to call you that time since it was the first time ... I was informed that I don't have any rights about the changes in the class numbers and schedules so you should have informed our managers about it. It's in our company policy that we will just follow what was in our schedule... I was sincerely hoping you'd call our manager since I know you are sick this time and you were not in your office.
I hope you get well soon and I am looking forward to talking with you on Monday.
--Jenny
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