Dear [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
You always tell me "How I am?". I always say "pretty good". Do you know why? Thanks to you, Chelsea. I feel alive, happy, and energetic. Frankly, I've forgotten my first resolution I made, which is to enjoy English everyday without breaks. As time goes by, my patient is wearing thin I guess. When I first got to know how to enjoy English, I spent all my hours enjoying English by using radio, drama, on and off line lectures. Even when I was smoking, I listened to something spoken in English. Lately, I applied for your class again and I send a letter to you in English everyday. Sometimes, I could share my own private story with you. Believe it or not, that relieves my concerns. You are really helpful. Hang in there. See you tomorrow. Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Thank you so much for sending me another letter!
I was touched by your message. I hope that I will be able to continue meeting your expectations.
Keep up your good works and always take care!
t. Chelsea
You always tell me \"How I am?\".
>>You always ask me, \"How am I?\".
I always say \"pretty good\".
>>Correct!
>>OR: I always answer, \"pretty good\".
Do you know why?
>>Correct!
Thanks to you, Chelsea.
>>Correct!
I feel alive, happy, and energetic.
>>Correct!
Frankly, I\'ve forgotten my first resolution I made, which is to enjoy English everyday without breaks.
>>Frankly speaking, I\'ve forgotten the first resolution that I made for myself, which is to enjoy English everyday without breaks.
As time goes by, my patient is wearing thin I guess.
>>As time goes by, my patience is wearing thin I guess.
When I first got to know how to enjoy English, I spent all my hours enjoying English by using radio, drama, on and off line lectures.
>>When I first got to know how to enjoy English, I spent all my hours enjoying English by listening to the radio, watching dramas, and attending on and off lectures.
Even when I was smoking, I listened to something spoken in English.
>>Even when I was smoking, I listened to conversations in English.
Lately, I applied for your class again and I send a letter to you in English everyday.
>>Lately, I enrolled in your class again and I send you a letter written in English language everyday.
Sometimes, I could share my own private story with you.
>>Correct!
Believe it or not, that relieves my concerns.
>>Correct!
You are really helpful.
>>Correct!
Hang in there.
>>Correct!
See you tomorrow.
>>Correct!
Bye.
>>Correct!
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