Dear [Name]

2013-08-28 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

학생이 쓴 원문

Happy hump day!! Time flies, doesn't it? When I was a student, it seemed to go really slow, though. I guess as we concentrate on something, we feel like time passes fast. The feedback you send me every each day is really useful. You cannot be a fair-weather friend for me, right? I just tried to use a new word you taught. Speaking of spitting on food for revenge, I also heard some employees admitted they had experiences like spitting on a cup of joe(coffee) for their boss. What's more, one of my acquaintances told me she put her husband's tooth brush into the toilet water and then put in back her husband's cup in an effort to revenge. From then on, she never kissed her husband. Don't take that the wrong way. Not every Koreans do that. See you tomorrow morning. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Thank you again for sending me another letter. Don\'t worry because I\'m not thinking that all Koreans do that^^_. You never fail to make me smile whenever you send me a letter. Keep on doing so. Take care and see you in our next class. T.Chelsea Happy hump day!! >>Correct! Time flies, doesn\'t it? >>Time flies, isn\'t it?  When I was a student, it seemed to go really slow, though. >>Correct! >>Or:When I was still a student, it seemed to move really slow, though. I guess as we concentrate on something, we feel like time passes fast. >> Correct! The feedback you send me every each day is really useful. >>The feedback you send me everyday is really useful. >>Or: The feedback you send me each day is really helpful.  You cannot be a fair-weather friend for me, right? >>Correct!  I just tried to use one of  a new word you taught. >>I just ried to use one of the new words you taught me.  Speaking of spitting on food for revenge, I also heard some employees admitted they had experiences like spitting on a cup of joe(coffee) for their boss. >>Correct!  What\'s more, one of my acquaintances told me she put her husband\'s tooth brush into the toilet water and then put in back her husband\'s cup in an effort to revenge. >>Another, one of my acquaintances told me that for revenge, she put her husband\'s toothbrush into the toilet water and then brought it back to her husband\'s cup.  From then on, she never kissed her husband. >>Correct! Don\'t take that the wrong way. >>Correct! Not every Koreans do that. >>Not every Korean do that. >>Or: Not all Koreans do that. See you tomorrow morning. >>Correct!  Bye. >>Correct!

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