Dear [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
I went to bed late yesterday cuz I had time for drinking and talking with my co-workers. That's why I feel little bit tired now. That's an another evidence that I'm not young any more I guess. Back in 2001, when I was a fresh man in university, I stayed up all night in drinking alcohol but never got exhausted at all. We talked about family reunion between two Koreas. Fortunately, no other relatives and acquaintances live in North, but I feel sorry whenever I listen to the news about people who lost their adorable family members by the Korean War. Lee administration, the former president of South Korea, was not friendly against North Korea. However, after president was changed, our government are trying to pacify the North by supporting economy assistance. I hope many people meet their lost family members through this family reunion even. In addition, I wish reunification also would be achieved within my lifetime.
강사 첨삭
Hello there^^
I enjoyed reading your composition. I hope that the reunification that you are wanting
would happen in both Koreas someday. Let\'s talk more of this tomorrow^^
See you in class and enjoy the rest of the evening.
TEACHER CHELSEA
I went to bed late yesterday cuz I had time for drinking and talking with my co-workers.
>>Correct
That\'s why I feel little bit tired now.
>>That\'s why I feel a little bit tired now.
That\'s an another evidence that I\'m not young any more I guess.
>>That is another evidence that I\'m not young anymore I guess.
Back in 2001, when I was a fresh man in university, I stayed up all night in drinking alcohol but never got exhausted at all.
>> Correct
We talked about family reunion between two Koreas.
>>Correct
Fortunately, no other relatives and acquaintances live in North, but I feel sorry whenever I listen to the news about people who lost their adorable family members by the Korean War.
>>Correct
Lee administration, the former president of South Korea, was not friendly against North Korea.
>>Correct
However, after president was changed, our government are trying to pacify the North by supporting economy assistance.
>>However, after our president was changed, our government is trying to pacify the North by supporting economy assistance.
I hope many people meet their lost family members through this family reunion even.
>> Correct
In addition, I wish reunification also would be achieved within my lifetime.
>> Correct
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