Dear [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
Happy Friday again!! I received my new schedule for staring next Monday, which will be used during mid-term test preparation. Well, I was totally shocked because there's no vacancy on the time table. It means every single day, I have full of classes, which amounts 25 hours per week. Compared to before, 5 hours increased. I hope you understand my letter will be likely to be shorter and shorter from now on. But I'm gonna do my best. In some ways, I enjoy my hectic schedule, which also means I'm still alive. Enjoy happy weekend. See you next brand new Monday. Written by [이름].
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday [이름]!
It\'s Friday again. Thank you so much for not failing in sending me a letter.
You don\'t have to worry because I absolutely understand. I hope that eventhough you\'re schedule is hectic,
you won\'t give up you\'re class with me.
Have a great weekend ahead and see you on Monday.
T. Chelsea
Happy Friday again!!
>>Correct!
I received my new schedule for staring next Monday, which will be used during mid-term test preparation.
>>I received my new schedule for Monday and for the following days which will be used during the mid-term test preparation.
Well, I was totally shocked because there\'s no vacancy on the time table.
>>Well, I was totally shocked because there\'s no vacant time on the time table.
It means every single day, I have full of classes, which amounts 25 hours per week.
>>It means that every single day, my class schedule is full, and that would be 25 hours per week.
Compared to before, 5 hours increased.
>>Compared from before, 5 hours was added on my class schedule.
I hope you understand my letter will be likely to be shorter and shorter from now on.
>>I hope that you would understand why my letter will be likely to be shorter and shorter from now on.
But I\'m gonna do my best.
>>Correct!
In some ways, I enjoy my hectic schedule, which also means I\'m still alive.
>>Correct!
Enjoy happy weekend.
>>Enjoy and happy weekend/
See you next brand new Monday.
>>See you on Monday.
Written by [이름].
>>-Written by [이름]
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