Dear [Name]

2013-09-02 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Dear [Name] I'm so glad to talk you, Klein. I'm so sorry Chelsea didn't feel well today. Say hello to her, and tell her "you'll be up and around sooner or later." "I will always wait for you same time same place." Frankly, only two days, Saturday and Sunday, I didn't speak English, but I felt nervous when we were on the phone. In addition, Klein, you talked to me for the first time. I take little while to warm up to pretty girls like you. That's why some girls often misunderstand my intention. Anyhow, enjoy the rest of the day. I'm really looking forward to meeting you again. I didn't mean I wish Chelsea would be sick again.

강사 첨삭

Hello there^^ It was also my pleasure to meet such a smart and sweet student like you^^ I hope so that the next time you will hear my voice you would be more confident and won\'t feel that nervousness again^^ I wish you all the best and hope to talk to you again soon~   Dear [Name]>>Dear [Name],I\'m so glad to talk you, Klein. >>Correct. I\'m so sorry Chelsea didn\'t feel well today. >>Correct. >>OR: I\'m so sorry because Teacher Chelsea didn\'t feel well today. Say hello to her, and tell her \"you\'ll be up and around sooner or later.\" >>Say hello to her, and tell her, \"You\'ll be up and around sooner or later. \"I will always wait for you same time same place. >>I will always wait for you at the same time and place.\" \" Frankly, only two days, Saturday and Sunday, I didn\'t speak English, but I felt nervous when we were on the phone. >>Frankly, for only two days, Saturday and Sunday, I didn\'t speak English but I felt nervous when we were on the phone.  In addition, Klein, you talked to me for the first time. >>Correct.  I take little while to warm up to pretty girls like you. >>I take a little while to warm up to a pretty girl like you. That\'s why some girls often misunderstand my intention. >>Correct. Anyhow, enjoy the rest of the day. >>Correct. I\'m really looking forward to meeting you again. >I\'m really looking forward to meet you again.  I didn\'t mean I wish Chelsea would be sick again. >>I didn\'t mean, I wish Chelsea would be sick again.

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