Dear [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm so fabulous to have you back, Chelsea. You'd better take care of yourself well. Staying healthy is another duty we have to carry out as professionals. ^^ I didn't mean you did wrong. I just want you to feel great every day. My boss always forces me not to be sick. Of course, without any bad intention. You were curious about what my friend told about me to my girl friend last weekend. Everyone has s skeleton in the closet, right? I believe I've made so many mistakes, from which I've also learned so many things. I used to play hookey all the time. I hurt my ex-girl friends' heart by being selfish, pride, and ego. Who I used to be makes who I am. Thanks to my troublesome past, I matured a little bit I guess.
강사 첨삭
Hello there^^
I\'m so glad to hear your voice again. Thank you for the inspiring words.
It\'s really true that we can learn from our mistakes.
I hope your ex-girlfriend will be okay.
I\'m so glad that you matured.
Have a fabulous night!
Teacher Chelsea
I\'m so fabulous to have you back, Chelsea.
>>Correct.
>> OR: It feels fabulous to have you back in class Chelsea.
You\'d better take care of yourself well.
>>Correct.
Staying healthy is another duty we have to carry out as professionals. ^^ I didn\'t mean you did wrong. I just want you to feel great every day.>>Correct.
My boss always forces me not to be sick. Of course, without any bad intention.
>>Correct.
You were curious about what my friend told about me to my girl friend last weekend.
>>Correct.
>>OR: You were curious about what my friend told about me to my girlfriend last weekend.
Everyone has s skeleton in the closet, right?
>>Everyone has skeleton in the closet, right?
I believe I\'ve made so many mistakes, from which I\'ve also learned so many things.>>Correct.
I used to play hookey all the time.
>>I used to play hockey all the time.
I hurt my ex-girl friends\' heart by being selfish, pride, and ego.
>>I hurt my ex-girlfriend\'s heart by being selfish, proud, and egoistic.
Who I used to be makes who I am.
>>Correct.
Thanks to my troublesome past, I matured a little bit I guess.
>>Correct.
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