Dear [Name]

2013-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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After I hung up your call, I went to work immediately so as to prepare for assignment and handout. As I told you, my first class begins a half past five. I have only 15 minutes to write this letter. Strange to say, I like being hectic, which makes me feel alive, energetic, and boosted up energy with passion. I hope my students also feel like me. They are still young and lack of self-motivations on studying. Isn't it my job to find out what makes them enjoy, concentrate on studying. It's an ongoing problems for all the teachers all around the world to solve I think.

강사 첨삭

Hello there^^   Thanks again for your effort in doing this composition despite your hectic schedule. I hope that your students will learn a lot of things from a good teacher like you. Keep on inspiring them and keep on doing what you think is right^^. See you in class and I salute for doing a good job. Bye~ Teacher Chelsea   After I hung up your call, I went to work immediately so as to prepare for assignment and handout. >> After I hang up your call, I went to work immediately so as to prepare for the assignment and handout. >> OR: After hanging up your call, I went back to work immediately for me to do my assigment and the handout.  As I told you, my first class begins a half past five. >> Correct I have only 15 minutes to write this letter. >> Correct Strange to say, I like being hectic, which makes me feel alive, energetic, and boosted up energy with passion. >>Correct >> BETTER: Sounds strange isn\'t it? I like being rushing, which makes me feel alive, energetic, and it boosts up my energy with passion. I hope my students also feel like me. >> I hope my students will feel the same. They are still young and lack of self-motivations on studying. >> Correct Isn\'t it my job to find out what makes them enjoy, concentrate on studying. >> Isn\'t it my job is to find out what makes them enjoy and concentrate on studying. It\'s an ongoing problems for all the teachers all around the world to solve I think. >> It\'s an ongoing problem to be solved by all teachers around the world. That\'s what I think.    

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