Dear [Name]

2013-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

Doing something regularly is not easy at all I guess. There's saying 작심삼일 which means "Every resolution just lasts for three days" in Korean. That's why some people say you can make a new resolution every three days. We've known each other almost for a month. Honestly, I didn't feel like writing this letter, but I heard hallucinate sound from you, Chelsea, saying 'I've been waiting for your message. English is not my mother tongue. So it takes pretty much time and effort. I have to go through so many difficulties. These days, I feel like I'm suffering from listening comprehension. But I don't mind. If I don't give up, after I overcome these difficulties, I will improve my ability without exception. Have a nice day. See you tomorrow. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Thanks a lot for doing your homework. I am very grateful for your effort and diligence. Your composition today is very interesting because you used variety of vocabularies and sentence patterns. Kindly check the corrections I made and try to review them. Then, try to incorporate them in your daily conversations. Take care and enjoy the rest of  the day. I\'ll call you back again soon. =) Teacher Chelsea^^   Doing something regularly is not easy at all I guess. >>Correct. There\'s saying 작심삼일 which means \"Every resolution just lasts for three days\" in Korean. That\'s why some people say you can make a new resolution every three days. >>In Korea, there is a saying 작심삼일 which means, \"Every resolution lasts for three days\". That\'s why some people say that  you can make a new resolution every three days.  We\'ve known each other almost for a month. >>Correct  Honestly, I didn\'t feel like writing this letter, but I heard hallucinate sound from you, Chelsea, saying \'I\'ve been waiting for your message. >>Honestly, I didn\'t feel like writing this letter but I heard hallucination from you saying, \"I\'ve been waiting for your message.\"  English is not my mother tongue. So it takes pretty much time and effort. I have to go through so many difficulties. These days, I feel like I\'m suffering from listening comprehension. But I don\'t mind. If I don\'t give up, after I overcome these difficulties, I will improve my ability without exception. >>English is not my mother tongue so it takes a lot of  time and efforts. I have to go through so many difficulties. These days, I feel like I\'m suffering from listening comprehension but I don\'t mind. If I don\'t give up after I overcome these difficulties, I will improve my ability without exception.  Have a nice day. See you tomorrow. >>Have a nice day. See you tomorrow. Bye. >>OR: Goodbye.

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