Dear [Name]

It's been a while to send a message to you. Chuseok, Korean Thanks Giving Day, is coming up. We prepare for something not to desecrate graves of our ancestors such as cutting grass which has grown up a lot, paying respects with several food for rites. I've had a brush with this ceremony since I was young. It's not easy at all. We have to climb up stiff mountain which people barely visit except for Chuseok, by carrying heavy grass cutting machine and heavy backpack filled with food. I'm very curious if there's holiday like Thanks Giving Day in your country and if there is, how you celebrate it. Anyway, have a nice day and see you tomorrow afternoon. Bye.

Hello there! Thank you for sharing about your activities during Chuseok. Your sacrifices are worth it because I believe your ancestors are happy seeing what you are willing to do to pay them respects. ^^ About your query, I will try to answer it in class next time. :) Here are the corrections I made for you. See you! T. Chelsea -   It\'s been a while to send a message to you. >> It\'s been a while since I last sent you a message. Chuseok, Korean Thanks Giving Day, is coming up. >> Chuseok, the Korean Thanksgiving Day is coming up. We prepare for something not to desecrate graves of our ancestors such as cutting grass which has grown up a lot, paying respects with several food for rites. >> We prepare some things that do not desecrate the graves of our ancestors such as cutting the grass which has grown around their tombs and we pay our respects by preparing several food for the rites. I\'ve had a brush with this ceremony since I was young. >> I\'ve had a brush of this ceremony since I was young. It\'s not easy at all. >> Correct. We have to climb up stiff mountain which people barely visit except for Chuseok, by carrying heavy grass cutting machine and heavy backpack filled with food. >> We have to climb up a stiff mountain that people rarely visit except for Chuseok while carrying a heavy grass cutting machine and heavy backpacks filled with food. I\'m very curious if there\'s holiday like Thanks Giving Day in your country and if there is, how you celebrate it. >> Correct. Anyway, have a nice day and see you tomorrow afternoon. Bye. >> Correct.