Dear [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, there. Sorry for driving and answering your phone and making you worrying about me. Anyhow, I made Kimchi with my parents yesterday from early morning to evening and was exhausted when I came back my home at night. The kimchi we made is so goooood! :)
Every time we make Kimchi, my mom prepare some special dishes with oyster, pork and fresh kimchi which are so delicious. I shared the food with husband today and he loved it so much.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mi Jung,
It isn't a problem. I perfectly understand your situation. I'm sure now that you are a good driver.
I hope I can drive like you too. kkk. Take care! See you tomorrow!
Love,
Verna
Hi, there.
>>Correct
Sorry for driving and answering your phone and making you worrying about me.
>>Sorry, for driving while talking to you on the phone and for making you worried about me.
Anyhow, I made Kimchi with my parents yesterday from early morning to evening and was exhausted when I came back my home at night.
>>Anyhow, I made Kimchi with my parents yesterday from early morning to evening and was exhausted when I came back to my home at night.
The kimchi we made is so goooood! :)
>>Correct (I want to taste it! kkk)Every time we make Kimchi, my mom prepare some special dishes with oyster, pork and fresh kimchi which are so delicious.
>>Every time we make Kimchi, my mom prepares some special dishes with oyster, pork and fresh kimchi which are so delicious.
I shared the food with husband today and he loved it so much.
>>Correct
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