Dear [Name]

- Glad to meet you. It's a pitty that Grace have a problem. - But, I Welcome you. - I make a memorial service only once an year and it happens in november. - lots of friends. - great great grandfather

Hello [이름]! I understand that English could be really hard, but with everyday practice I believe that we can improve a lot. I can see that you are very interested in learning so I am also very much willing to help you… T.Mellisa ;)   Here are my corrections for you: -Glad to meet you. It\'s a pitty that Grace have a problem. >> I am glad to meet you. It’s a pity that Grace has a problem.- But, I Welcome you.>> I welcome you as my new teacher.- I make a memorial service only once an year and it happens in november.>> We celebrate memorial service to remember our dead once a year and it happens on November.- lots of friends.>> My brother made lots of friends.- great great grandfather The grandfather of my father is my great great grandfather.